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Anonymous
8/17/21, 2:23 AM
It's remarkably rare to see a non-evil doctor. Or a gay best friend who isn't (so far) secretly a villain mastermind. It's quite a refreshing change tbh. Still curious to see the seizures = repressed gayness aspect of the story resolved. Or just more on how the seizures are fucking with his mind. The way prior chapters portrayed it, it almost read like multiple personalities wrestling for control or something to that affect. Very interested to see where this story goes.
8/16/21, 1:00 PM
Big fan of this series. I love the flow of events here; the little tease we get when we think Luke's going to give in and his scene with the coach both make the whole product sexier. I gotta say though, this chapter reads more like a rush job or an unfinished draft than previous ones did (which had clean, brief paragraphs, correct punctuation, clean spelling, in general showed a really high skill level!). Life gets crazy sometimes, it's all good, but going forward I'd personally be happy to wait two more weeks (or whatever) so you have time to finish editing and deliver that quality we know you're capable of!

8/16/21, 2:01 PM
@tenser13 It's good to know about it. I'm not sure how long it took me to write it, but I'll try to give a check before I post the next chapters. Thanks for the feedback!

8/16/21, 2:21 PM
@tenser13 I had messed up the paragraphs, I did a revision for that. Thanks for helping me notice!

8/17/21, 1:47 AM
@Lookintomyeyesboy Love it, thank you! And no problem, just happy to have your hot stories on here!
Martin
8/16/21, 8:38 PM
Honestly, the way you write, you don't need no kink. This scene was amazingly hot. I'm really honored to have you aboard! Please share more of these stories from a "less kinky phase"!

8/17/21, 12:25 AM
@Martin :3 you're too kind! I've got some stuff in mind for GCS but I just need to get through some life stuff first!
8/15/21, 7:06 PM
Great chapter about the morning condition of Erik and Eli. Good to read they are this far already. What extra will Vincent do to Erik to surpass his fear of already expected physical pain. Hope there is afterwards some room for a story about Erik when he is searching for more humiliation and pain at work too. There could be some thugs who would like to give a tattooed and pierced cop a new chapter in his new life. How far will the feminization of Eli go? There might be some colleague of Eli who will be asked to help.

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 5:08 PM
@uniform53, so glad you liked it! I already have a story arch for Erik and Eli mapped out, but the idea of thugs vs. mindfucked cop slut is a hot one! There are other people in Vince's life that deserve punishment who i havnt introduced yet... something to think about ;)

8/17/21, 12:22 AM
@Blackjinx123, sounds promising, I hope there is a muscled sergeant (neighbour who encouraged Erik to beat his brother more often?) on Vince's list. The most active thug (loving verbal and sexual abuse already) could be trained to be the beast in the planned sex videos. Sorry, a lot of fantasies through my mind already.
8/16/21, 9:53 PM
I like the heat between the G-man and Zeke. The casual fondling and seduction aspect of it really turns me on. I'm eager to see what happens in the next chapter!

8/17/21, 12:04 AM
@Proteus Thank you! Next one will be up in a day or two :)
8/16/21, 11:59 PM
well, let see how things will go from now one
8/16/21, 11:23 PM
The first part made me like Charlie more. Even if he later goes and does something very villainous, it was good to see he's not entirely remorseless, and that he's not seeing his professor as pure carnal interest. It was a good chapter, for a moment I thought Charlie was going to start to make changes here and there to fix the mess he made, but I had forgot that rule. It's much better the way you wrote it, it was too early in the story to begin with changes at all directions, and I like a lot Prof Dover's confusion . By the way, I think that about "call Charles Baker random fat nicknames when they’re alone" adds a little cute touch.
Martin
8/16/21, 8:24 PM
All right, now we have some drama... Let's see where this is heading. Please go on!

8/16/21, 10:50 PM
@Martin thanks for the comment. I was actually just going to do star on the next chapter. I'm glad you like it. I think the direction I take this in might branch off to a sequel story, if it turn out good, so, more is on the horizon.
Martin
8/16/21, 8:21 PM
It's a difficult topic, a love story with a self-loathing homophobic closet case... But I like what you did so far. Let's see where this is going! I hope it'll have a goog ending... :)
Aug 15, 2021
8/15/21, 10:57 PM
Who's that in profile photo

8/16/21, 7:48 PM
@Gaymer77 Unfortunately, I don't know, really wish I did as he's extremely hot. That pic is a lot of inspiration for the story.