Recent Comments

Daniel
8/18/21, 3:05 AM
not into it bud, guess I'll try a few more chapters before I bail I.J.S.
Daniel
8/18/21, 3:00 AM
losing interest, well written but very clinical man ...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/18/21, 2:52 AM
ok dude, let's see what you think is hot ! I.J.S.
8/14/21, 12:39 AM
Loved this story so much!!! Mark losing control, and the way it was written showing how easy it is, just makes me lust for that gum and it was awesome!! Love the writing man!!

8/18/21, 12:15 AM
Thanks @Bramurai! I gave it another read myself - I'm pretty happy with how this one turned out :)
Aug 13, 2021
Oxly
8/17/21, 11:24 PM
wow!! incredible job, i wish i could meet a Daddy like this! 💖
Willie Cici
8/17/21, 2:33 AM
I have to be honest. This was the final installment, but from these comments, I think I have to go back and rethink this through. We'll see where genius (Lol!) takes me.

8/17/21, 10:55 PM
@Willie Cici I mean, I'd be lying if I said I wasn't interested but I felt I should say that you did leave this one at a good place. Jason has dealt with his mental hang-ups about being gay that were threatening him (via the chip). He will probably be OK going forward. He might start a LTR with Zach, who is a great guy and a good friend. It's not a bad way to end it.
8/17/21, 8:59 PM
Loved it man. so hot!looking firward to reading your other chapters
Harry
8/17/21, 3:52 PM
This series is dope.
8/17/21, 3:04 PM
More please!
Anonymous
8/17/21, 2:35 PM
Yes definitely go back and see where you else you can take it. I agree it seemed more like Jason was being brainwashed or suggested and suggested and he was taking the suggestions in as his own thoughts. I'd be curious to see how far that will go. I'd even be curious to see if Zach might have been interested in Creating different personalities for Jason. The idea of Adam really was never explained why or how he was involved and who the client was