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8/16/21, 11:59 PM
well, let see how things will go from now one
8/16/21, 11:23 PM
The first part made me like Charlie more. Even if he later goes and does something very villainous, it was good to see he's not entirely remorseless, and that he's not seeing his professor as pure carnal interest. It was a good chapter, for a moment I thought Charlie was going to start to make changes here and there to fix the mess he made, but I had forgot that rule. It's much better the way you wrote it, it was too early in the story to begin with changes at all directions, and I like a lot Prof Dover's confusion . By the way, I think that about "call Charles Baker random fat nicknames when they’re alone" adds a little cute touch.
Martin
8/16/21, 8:24 PM
All right, now we have some drama... Let's see where this is heading. Please go on!

8/16/21, 10:50 PM
@Martin thanks for the comment. I was actually just going to do star on the next chapter. I'm glad you like it. I think the direction I take this in might branch off to a sequel story, if it turn out good, so, more is on the horizon.
Martin
8/16/21, 8:21 PM
It's a difficult topic, a love story with a self-loathing homophobic closet case... But I like what you did so far. Let's see where this is going! I hope it'll have a goog ending... :)
Aug 15, 2021
8/15/21, 10:57 PM
Who's that in profile photo

8/16/21, 7:48 PM
@Gaymer77 Unfortunately, I don't know, really wish I did as he's extremely hot. That pic is a lot of inspiration for the story.
8/16/21, 7:41 PM
i LOVE your stories!! please update daily
Aug 11, 2021
Anonymous
8/16/21, 7:38 PM
ryan and the cobra curse was actually my gay awakening as a kid. thank you for this!!!
FinWithPissedPants
8/16/21, 6:46 PM
Really hot!
Barazion
8/16/21, 6:09 PM
Good premise, Now can Jak expand his horizions? what about a hyper chub lover sharing his room?
5/28/20, 9:50 PM
Totally disagree with the previous poster. The fact that Tommy becomes so dumb it's all about the Fuk! Is hot as they come. This story and this chapter in particular is one of my all time faves. Love it. Meant to say so long ago.

8/16/21, 4:57 PM
I'm with @Tattcub, the final dumb down talk was perfect for such a story. Hopefully we'll get to see more!