Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/16/21, 8:50 AM
wow the stories and the build up is really good. nice work man

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:42 PM
thanks so much, so happy you like it so far!
8/16/21, 4:13 AM
thank you for the fast update! i love the struggles that the 2 are now experiencing! I hope there will be a domestic slave for either of the dad or the cop brother!

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:42 PM
@Erratic101, I'm so glad you like it! Writing the bully brothers freak-outs is a real treat. There will be a slave in the future, but I'm not going to spoil it! ;)
8/16/21, 2:11 PM
This is an interesting start. I’m interested to see where it’s going.

8/16/21, 2:53 PM
@MonsterMash62 Us, too! We've got a couple more chapters cued up and ready to go, but the rest is, well... *waves hand across the heavens in a grandiose manner* It's been fun to write thus far though. Stay tuned for actual sex!
Anonymous
8/16/21, 6:43 AM
Very hot, the way you do dialogue is a bit confusing though

8/16/21, 2:22 PM
I ha messed up the spacing, it should be fixed now. Sorry about that.
Madoc Larkin
8/16/21, 1:05 PM
This was a nice read! Excited to see where you take it from here. I also thought Jak's input for the Thing box was pretty clever.
8/16/21, 9:42 AM
What may also happened is that Ronny, realizing Fin was his Beta, did whatever he could to get Finn to accept it. If his inner drives were so pumped I can see his own self-justification. He may not have wanted to be without a Beta. I would hope that as they mature in their relationship that they will become more loving and less sex-focused. Ronny said that they're both just two guys. I hope he can realize that he didn't really give Fin a choice and apologize. I think Fin would forgive him soon enough.
8/16/21, 7:10 AM
Great start! Hope there’s more to come.
8/16/21, 6:09 AM
Hot. Can;t wait for more.
Aug 15, 2021
8/16/21, 4:46 AM
Fun little story! I'd like to see a sequel with a subject who's a little less of a slut to begin with--more resistance would make the story even hotter, in my opinion. One suggestion: take the time to proofread your work (or get another GSS user to proofread for you). At one point, Sam notices a "sex swin," which I assume is like a sex swing, but for Southerners ("I'm fixin' to take a ride on the sex swin'! Any y'all wanna join me?").
8/16/21, 1:14 AM
I'm glad they bonded but I'm not happy about Fin being Ronny's "bitch". Semantics I suppose but also he was drugged by the pre-workout drink so he had no choice to really decide. Yes, he could have left when Ronny explained about how Betas have choice but by that point he was addicted.

8/16/21, 4:12 AM
@Cutlerfan I'm glad you feel this way! I wanted to leave the outcome up to the reader's interpretation. Some may think it was true love while others may think Ronny was more devious than he let on.