Recent Comments

mcdermottr13@gmail.com
8/15/21, 5:27 PM
I loved the humiliation in the dream. Keep up the great story.

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:49 PM
@mcdermottr13@gmail.com, so happy you liked it! i had a blast writing that part!
8/16/21, 10:16 AM
Another great chapter! I’d to see they breakfast we really need to see the whole family interacting

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:47 PM
@zeeker8b, thanks so much! the first breakfast for the new and improved Kingston men will definitely be one for the books!
Anonymous
8/16/21, 8:50 AM
wow the stories and the build up is really good. nice work man

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:42 PM
thanks so much, so happy you like it so far!
8/16/21, 4:13 AM
thank you for the fast update! i love the struggles that the 2 are now experiencing! I hope there will be a domestic slave for either of the dad or the cop brother!

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:42 PM
@Erratic101, I'm so glad you like it! Writing the bully brothers freak-outs is a real treat. There will be a slave in the future, but I'm not going to spoil it! ;)
8/16/21, 2:11 PM
This is an interesting start. I’m interested to see where it’s going.

8/16/21, 2:53 PM
@MonsterMash62 Us, too! We've got a couple more chapters cued up and ready to go, but the rest is, well... *waves hand across the heavens in a grandiose manner* It's been fun to write thus far though. Stay tuned for actual sex!
Anonymous
8/16/21, 6:43 AM
Very hot, the way you do dialogue is a bit confusing though

8/16/21, 2:22 PM
I ha messed up the spacing, it should be fixed now. Sorry about that.
Madoc Larkin
8/16/21, 1:05 PM
This was a nice read! Excited to see where you take it from here. I also thought Jak's input for the Thing box was pretty clever.
8/16/21, 9:42 AM
What may also happened is that Ronny, realizing Fin was his Beta, did whatever he could to get Finn to accept it. If his inner drives were so pumped I can see his own self-justification. He may not have wanted to be without a Beta. I would hope that as they mature in their relationship that they will become more loving and less sex-focused. Ronny said that they're both just two guys. I hope he can realize that he didn't really give Fin a choice and apologize. I think Fin would forgive him soon enough.
8/16/21, 7:10 AM
Great start! Hope there’s more to come.
8/16/21, 6:09 AM
Hot. Can;t wait for more.