Recent Comments

Barazion
8/16/21, 6:09 PM
Good premise, Now can Jak expand his horizions? what about a hyper chub lover sharing his room?
5/28/20, 9:50 PM
Totally disagree with the previous poster. The fact that Tommy becomes so dumb it's all about the Fuk! Is hot as they come. This story and this chapter in particular is one of my all time faves. Love it. Meant to say so long ago.

8/16/21, 4:57 PM
I'm with @Tattcub, the final dumb down talk was perfect for such a story. Hopefully we'll get to see more!
mcdermottr13@gmail.com
8/15/21, 5:27 PM
I loved the humiliation in the dream. Keep up the great story.

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:49 PM
@mcdermottr13@gmail.com, so happy you liked it! i had a blast writing that part!
8/16/21, 10:16 AM
Another great chapter! I’d to see they breakfast we really need to see the whole family interacting

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:47 PM
@zeeker8b, thanks so much! the first breakfast for the new and improved Kingston men will definitely be one for the books!
Anonymous
8/16/21, 8:50 AM
wow the stories and the build up is really good. nice work man

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:42 PM
thanks so much, so happy you like it so far!
8/16/21, 4:13 AM
thank you for the fast update! i love the struggles that the 2 are now experiencing! I hope there will be a domestic slave for either of the dad or the cop brother!

Blackjinx123
8/16/21, 4:42 PM
@Erratic101, I'm so glad you like it! Writing the bully brothers freak-outs is a real treat. There will be a slave in the future, but I'm not going to spoil it! ;)
8/16/21, 2:11 PM
This is an interesting start. I’m interested to see where it’s going.

8/16/21, 2:53 PM
@MonsterMash62 Us, too! We've got a couple more chapters cued up and ready to go, but the rest is, well... *waves hand across the heavens in a grandiose manner* It's been fun to write thus far though. Stay tuned for actual sex!
Anonymous
8/16/21, 6:43 AM
Very hot, the way you do dialogue is a bit confusing though

8/16/21, 2:22 PM
I ha messed up the spacing, it should be fixed now. Sorry about that.
Madoc Larkin
8/16/21, 1:05 PM
This was a nice read! Excited to see where you take it from here. I also thought Jak's input for the Thing box was pretty clever.
8/16/21, 9:42 AM
What may also happened is that Ronny, realizing Fin was his Beta, did whatever he could to get Finn to accept it. If his inner drives were so pumped I can see his own self-justification. He may not have wanted to be without a Beta. I would hope that as they mature in their relationship that they will become more loving and less sex-focused. Ronny said that they're both just two guys. I hope he can realize that he didn't really give Fin a choice and apologize. I think Fin would forgive him soon enough.