Recent Comments

2/21/25, 10:42 PM
Great start! Looking forward to how this progresses.

2/24/25, 2:20 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you! Still working on the next chapter
2/21/25, 7:06 PM
Good boys obey! Nice... I was wondering how you will fix the unpaired issue with Xavier... but I like the pup approach... want to see what is next lesson :3 :blue_heart:

2/21/25, 7:08 PM
@[Math_Reez πŸ’™](/user/show/13470) Also wondering what was the sin... and who is guilty... I think it was Chaz... :P

2/24/25, 2:19 AM
@[Math_Reez πŸ’™](/user/show/13470) Hopefully all the lessons will be fun hehe.

2/24/25, 2:20 AM
@[Math_Reez πŸ’™](/user/show/13470) I may not be subtle... but perhaps there'll be a little more to it than that!
HypnoMutt
2/24/25, 1:36 AM
Thank you for this alt-ending and for this entire adventure. You took this huge, ambitious, sweeping story idea and just nailed it brilliantly. After following and enjoying your work in other places for a while now, I can say that this marks an evolution in your prowess and skill that puts you in the first rank of erotic writers in any genre - and your sure hand with the BDSM/hardcore aspects in the main story and in this alternate ending shows a deep understanding of the dark attraction that draws us in, holds us there, and for many of us gives deeper meaning to our lives. I'll enjoy coming back to this story, especially this ending - which IMO fits in nicely with everything else as written. Will be interesting to see how much of this control dynamic comes up in the future. Looking forward to what you have on deck in the fantasy realm! Thanks again for a great ride, and also for incorporating jazz elements (David Benoit came to mind) - maybe some Dexter Gordon next time? :) awoo.

2/24/25, 1:55 AM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) Thank you my friend. Thank you for taking the time to read, and comment! You are awesome!
2/23/25, 11:08 PM
So great to see a new installment in this series. I'm looking forward to seeing what Coach has in store for Austin to make it clear his boy is his and his only. Can't wait for the next one
Feb 23, 2025
Zander
2/23/25, 8:12 PM
The prologue is interesting and gives hope for a good story. But I hope that the next chapters, if the story is continued, will be longer and more interesting in terms of the characters' relationships with each other and will reveal the characters much more. I also hope there will be some pictures of the main characters (as the author presents them in the story). I would also like to clarify with the author, what stories inspired you to decide to write this story? Or is this already written story and you are just translating it for readers here?
2/22/25, 4:39 PM
This was an amazing story to read! I hate that it is over…but I wonder how you will create the sequel. Rocky and Colt obviously have more to their story and this β€œbad” end that really wasn’t bad makes me hope for the possibilities of what The Golden Eagle and his friends can get into next.

2/23/25, 6:10 PM
@[Retroguy](/user/show/10058741) Thank you for reading!
Anonymous
2/23/25, 5:43 PM
I love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next
2/23/25, 2:31 PM
Love realistic and opportunitic stories like this. Thank you for adjusting the ages. New to voyeurism myself, it seemed rather unsolicited of the storyteller to hide outside his window. But the final line from Greg redeems the whole plot. Thank you for keeping Internet fiction alive and referencing the original artist.
2/23/25, 1:47 PM
i could not have had any more FUN reading a story! THANKYOU
2/23/25, 1:03 PM
Another manly adventure courtesy of Big Metal Husband. How lucky we are to have such a storyteller.