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Aug 15, 2021
Art
8/15/21, 6:21 PM
I liked the story, but didn't see the necessity of the pink hair. I hope we read about more boy sluts from the cream. How did he discover it and develop it to this point?

8/15/21, 6:29 PM
@Art Oh the pink hair was really just for me. I have a thing for slutty bottoms with pink hair. As for the development of the cream, that might be a future origin story I might make.
Aug 15, 2021
8/15/21, 5:21 PM
Very hot. Does he make a jock slut cream? Take a little nerdy guy and turn him into muscle bound himbo with a pulsating hole.

8/15/21, 6:27 PM
@TexMuscle That's actually a great idea. That might be my next story.
8/15/21, 2:32 PM
Amazing stuff! There are more ideas in a single chapter of this story than some authors have in their whole careers.

8/15/21, 6:16 PM
@Hypnothrill Thanks, I think there's one more chapter in this one... Although I have the title for something new that I've not developed yet.... What if? The Sexual Variance Authority: Keeping things straight' A riff on the MCU's Time Variance Authority... the SVA is the division tasked with ensuring the timeline remains 'straight'. Instead of the tesseract causing the timeline to diverge its Loki's noticing that the Hulk has a 'third leg' that causes the multiverse.
8/15/21, 2:11 PM
Very excited to read more of how this turns out. Also curious to see what this "magic cock" we have been teased about does

8/15/21, 5:50 PM
Thanks! Marc's magic cock definitely makes an appearance next chapter. @ace_vage
8/13/21, 2:19 AM
Desperately waiting for the next chapter! Such a good read!

8/15/21, 5:49 PM
Thanks! Some real life stuff came up, but the next chapter is getting there! @italianstalian1987
Anonymous
8/15/21, 5:44 PM
In love with the premise - man, I'd love to see a sequel to this. Just picturing Jake being whisked off to a tell-all livestream after losing the game. Sam encourages him to strip out of his uniform completely since he won't be needing it anymore. With both of them naked, he makes Jake girlishly renouce his manhood, telling the feed that he's just not man enough to play the stud, and that it's just so much easier to let real men take control. Sam makes the jock name his girlish body parts and contrast his white jock body against a black man like him. As they jerk themselves to hardness, Sam makes Jake give a shoutout to his dad and his hometown in Mississippi all while gushing about how much bigger and better black cocks are versus his smaller white boy willy. He makes Jake name several of his teammates who have cocks smaller than Sam. Same makes Jake's emasculation sounds like friendly locker-room banter. Jake shyly confesses all sorts of emasculating and incriminating things to all but ensure that he gets kicked off the team. Jake starts to blubber and snivel once he learns he's here to be punished for all the shitty things he did while pretending to be a real man. He takes Jake's crumpled uniform and uses it as a kind of towel on the floor before sitting down on a chair and bending Jake over his lap. He spanks Jake until he cries, forcing him to apologize to every girl he's ever fucked individually while he was pretending to be a big macho man. Jake wets himself pathetically as his big jock body heaves with his sobs, and Sam makes sure the camera sees his stream soaking his uniform underneath them. He comments that this is all the man you're going to get out of a racist white boy. Sam dumps Jake off his lap once he's done pissing himself. Jake is distraught as he grovels at Sam's feet - he's willing to do anything to make it up to his man. He forces the sniveling jock to stand up and dress in his girlish things. He makes Jake lower his panties and two-finger stroke his willy to orgasm multiple times to get every last bit of manhood out of him. Jake obliges gleefully: milking his pud over his piss-soaked uniform over and over again until his girlish creampuffs are completely dry. Sam confirms this by giving Jake a prostate massage. He once again asks Jake to compare his shrunken white boy willy with his black cock. Jake gushes that he's absolutely in love with Sam's tool, and racist white boys like him could never compete. He makes Jake apologize earnestly for failing as a man, and makes him confess that he needs to keep his little white willy under control because thinking with it has only ever lead to disappointment. Sam's satisfied with Jake's apology and the rest of Sam's team comes out. They commemorate the death of Jake's manhood by presenting him a custom chastity cage with the team's name on it. They rivet Jake's manhood away to make sure Jake the jock stud never resurfaces. Sam allows Jake to pay reparations for his racist behavior as a man by servicing the rest of the team as a girl. As Sam stuffs Jake's muscle twat, he instructs Jake to be extra enthusiastic if he's interested in being his team's newest cheerleader.
8/15/21, 5:29 PM
Thank you. I hope you will continue with this.
Aug 15, 2021
Anonymous
8/15/21, 4:42 PM
Love how you explained the transformation. The nerve endings were a nice touch. Dr. Baer was very clever name. But pretty predictable. I must have made an appointment with him before.
Mitch_CoRob
8/15/21, 4:35 PM
I hope this story continues. There's a lot of world building here that I think could really expand the eroticism of the story. Moreso than is what already there.
3/2/21, 5:24 AM
A nice visit into the ever twisted mind of Blufman who so effortlessly makes these transformations totally real.

8/15/21, 3:56 PM
thanks man @Body Odor