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Mitch_CoRob
8/15/21, 4:35 PM
I hope this story continues. There's a lot of world building here that I think could really expand the eroticism of the story. Moreso than is what already there.
3/2/21, 5:24 AM
A nice visit into the ever twisted mind of Blufman who so effortlessly makes these transformations totally real.

8/15/21, 3:56 PM
thanks man @Body Odor
lakritz24
8/15/21, 3:54 PM
Interesting. I have been thinking about something made of siliconrubber, particels and chemicals. Jo. Jo. Ze.
Aug 15, 2021
8/15/21, 2:31 PM
Oh wow that was hot! Definitely cumming to this one again. wish that boyslut cream was real. I'd let daddy pump me full of it in a heart beat!
Mindwhisperer
8/15/21, 1:40 PM
I believe that encouragement of a writer must include a truthful assessment of the writer's work. This first submission is certainly better than many that have appeared here. Rather than nitpick, my criticism is that its author has the new writer tendency to really . . . really . . . really . . . really . . . really . . . really . . . really . . . really . . . really . . . really provide detail.
8/15/21, 6:55 AM
It will be interesting to see where the story goes from here, because the conflicts you set up in the beginning seem mostly to be resolved. Charlie now knows what is happening, and he's apparently made his peace with it. (Although I may be wrong about that, because I have a really hard time getting on Charlie's mental wavelength; some of his reactions seem completely counterintuitive to me). Even though the plotting and building of narrative suspense isn't quite working for me at the moment, I think the world-building is great, and I love the various glimpses we keep getting of this hypersexualized all-male world.

8/15/21, 1:31 PM
@Hypnothrill Thanks for this feedback. I struggled during the editing process with this fact, because we had actually finished at least this part by the time we decided we wanted to publish this story and submitted Day 1 for editing. Our core plans for the story have a different set of tensions in mind, and the Priapists were always meant to be more of a side piece, so ultimately I decided not try and draw out the mystery -- to Charlie -- of the Priapists any more in editing. (Also, as a personal preference I wanted to avoid excessive existential crisis, which this is... rife with potential for, haha. That might be why his reactions seem clipped.) I'm glad you're enjoying the worldbuilding, though! There's a lot more where that came from. Perhaps in a future exploration I'll write something from a Priapist's perspective before and during the transformation.
Aug 15, 2021
Anonymous
8/15/21, 1:19 PM
Brilliant, such a good story! I wouldn't mind being in either Sammy's or Dr Baer's places, so sexy.
8/15/21, 11:52 AM
Wow, things are escalating quickly
Aug 12, 2021
Martin
8/15/21, 11:37 AM
What a wondeful story! It's a grace to this new site, thank you very much for posting it. The rimming scene is one of the most intense I've ever read! Once "GayCollarStories" will be up (should be a matter of two or three weeks from now), please make sure to crosspost this story there, too. It's rare that I have read such a sweet sub/dom story, and it will fit perfectly there as well.
8/15/21, 11:29 AM
i need to reread this story