Recent Comments

8/15/21, 6:55 AM
It will be interesting to see where the story goes from here, because the conflicts you set up in the beginning seem mostly to be resolved. Charlie now knows what is happening, and he's apparently made his peace with it. (Although I may be wrong about that, because I have a really hard time getting on Charlie's mental wavelength; some of his reactions seem completely counterintuitive to me). Even though the plotting and building of narrative suspense isn't quite working for me at the moment, I think the world-building is great, and I love the various glimpses we keep getting of this hypersexualized all-male world.

8/15/21, 1:31 PM
@Hypnothrill Thanks for this feedback. I struggled during the editing process with this fact, because we had actually finished at least this part by the time we decided we wanted to publish this story and submitted Day 1 for editing. Our core plans for the story have a different set of tensions in mind, and the Priapists were always meant to be more of a side piece, so ultimately I decided not try and draw out the mystery -- to Charlie -- of the Priapists any more in editing. (Also, as a personal preference I wanted to avoid excessive existential crisis, which this is... rife with potential for, haha. That might be why his reactions seem clipped.) I'm glad you're enjoying the worldbuilding, though! There's a lot more where that came from. Perhaps in a future exploration I'll write something from a Priapist's perspective before and during the transformation.
Aug 15, 2021
Anonymous
8/15/21, 1:19 PM
Brilliant, such a good story! I wouldn't mind being in either Sammy's or Dr Baer's places, so sexy.
8/15/21, 11:52 AM
Wow, things are escalating quickly
Aug 12, 2021
Martin
8/15/21, 11:37 AM
What a wondeful story! It's a grace to this new site, thank you very much for posting it. The rimming scene is one of the most intense I've ever read! Once "GayCollarStories" will be up (should be a matter of two or three weeks from now), please make sure to crosspost this story there, too. It's rare that I have read such a sweet sub/dom story, and it will fit perfectly there as well.
8/15/21, 11:29 AM
i need to reread this story
8/15/21, 10:24 AM
*‘toasted quinoa and wild grain crumb with dandelion micro-greens, compressed celeriac discs and a pomegranate and golden beetroot foam’ * Holy shit I died laughing. Came to comment first. Haven't even
8/15/21, 9:25 AM
I love it and the chapter worth the wait. Thank you so much and can't wait for your new works!
Apr 4, 2017
8/14/21, 2:14 AM
This story is really something. At times I wasn't sure where it was going and I certainly was unprepared for where it ended up but the characters and storytelling were genuine - Both Roger and the narrator have faults but importantly they have redeeming qualities and that's what really hooks me as a reader.

8/15/21, 4:25 AM
@amul I really wanted this to be a story about a man who is sincerely trying to make the young man better, and to join with his lost love in the best possible way. Not a death of personality, but an enhancement though joining. It really should go over to the new Cupid site, I think. Most of my stuff probably belongs there.

Martin
8/15/21, 6:08 AM
@Papa Werebear You can simply use the edit function to publish any of your stories on Cupid. Just select it as an addition publishing site!
8/15/21, 6:06 AM
So good to see another chapter. Am really excited and am enjoying the journey you are taking us on. More, please!
8/14/21, 2:34 AM
You're a gifted writer. The personality merging that you write about in your stories has a completely different tone from everyone else's mind control stories. I hope you write more stories that explore this theme.

8/15/21, 4:28 AM
@amul It's how I like to write merging. Mutualism rather than parasitism.