Recent Comments

8/14/21, 2:34 AM
You're a gifted writer. The personality merging that you write about in your stories has a completely different tone from everyone else's mind control stories. I hope you write more stories that explore this theme.

8/15/21, 4:28 AM
@amul It's how I like to write merging. Mutualism rather than parasitism.
Aug 13, 2021
8/15/21, 1:48 AM
Well, to be honest, you add a old man being enslaved by a younger one (like in the final scenes) and I'm in! Also, you added feet so that made the part before amazing as well. Would love to see more older men enslaved :3
Daniel
8/15/21, 1:24 AM
the end of this chapter brought back hot memories, too little too late for me dude. hope you write other less Hallmarkish biker stories I.J.S.
8/14/21, 3:25 PM
Please give these boys a happy ending.

8/15/21, 1:21 AM
We'll see @amul! :)
8/14/21, 11:08 AM
Wow! What a chapter! Your skill in characterization extends to the other people in the story, I see (I love Eric's passive-aggressive commentary). Plus the sex scene in the car was achingly hot. I love the hints of magic and mystery in the tale, too. 10/10 all around! :)

8/15/21, 1:20 AM
Thank you so much! @Feed Your Head
Daniel
8/15/21, 1:04 AM
always wanted alien / biker porn, so this was working well for me...was...the sexy corruption factor has given way to so much "...I love you" etc it's all too easy. where's the struggle, the 'taking' the corruption ? I.J.S.
Daniel
8/15/21, 12:14 AM
even hotter the second time around dude I.J.S.
8/14/21, 11:57 PM
I've told you before how hot resistance is to me. And it is resistance par excelence when you feel the fear, pain or horror of the soon to be "victim." That was well set up and well executed. And Leo is happy now, so all is well.
Aug 12, 2021
8/14/21, 11:33 PM
Wish I was the guy rimming. hehe Honestly, good stuff!
Aug 13, 2021
8/13/21, 11:11 PM
Really hot story. Mental regression is hard to do 1st person. The transformation went a bit fast. You certainly picked some nice kinks to tie together in this story.

8/14/21, 5:03 PM
@amul Thanks a lot for the feedback! I totally agree with you on the transformation part, I tried to emulate the progressive lack of control of the protagonist, hence things rushing quicker at the end. I'm glad you found things to enjoy though, got some really bad early rating, I guess the niche stuff is polarizing haha!

8/14/21, 8:01 PM
@Mister F You keep writing what you think is hot, I guarantee you there will be people who share your kinks no matter how niche!