Recent Comments

8/14/21, 11:08 AM
Wow! What a chapter! Your skill in characterization extends to the other people in the story, I see (I love Eric's passive-aggressive commentary). Plus the sex scene in the car was achingly hot. I love the hints of magic and mystery in the tale, too. 10/10 all around! :)

8/15/21, 1:20 AM
Thank you so much! @Feed Your Head
Daniel
8/15/21, 1:04 AM
always wanted alien / biker porn, so this was working well for me...was...the sexy corruption factor has given way to so much "...I love you" etc it's all too easy. where's the struggle, the 'taking' the corruption ? I.J.S.
Daniel
8/15/21, 12:14 AM
even hotter the second time around dude I.J.S.
8/14/21, 11:57 PM
I've told you before how hot resistance is to me. And it is resistance par excelence when you feel the fear, pain or horror of the soon to be "victim." That was well set up and well executed. And Leo is happy now, so all is well.
Aug 12, 2021
8/14/21, 11:33 PM
Wish I was the guy rimming. hehe Honestly, good stuff!
Aug 13, 2021
8/13/21, 11:11 PM
Really hot story. Mental regression is hard to do 1st person. The transformation went a bit fast. You certainly picked some nice kinks to tie together in this story.

8/14/21, 5:03 PM
@amul Thanks a lot for the feedback! I totally agree with you on the transformation part, I tried to emulate the progressive lack of control of the protagonist, hence things rushing quicker at the end. I'm glad you found things to enjoy though, got some really bad early rating, I guess the niche stuff is polarizing haha!

8/14/21, 8:01 PM
@Mister F You keep writing what you think is hot, I guarantee you there will be people who share your kinks no matter how niche!
8/14/21, 4:57 PM
oooooh,I like this new Twist already thrilled for the next chapter

8/14/21, 7:56 PM
@ForgottenCradle Thank you! Glad to see people enjoying the twist as much as I enjoyed writing it.
8/14/21, 7:13 PM
Well, lte see how the day goes on
Aug 13, 2021
8/14/21, 7:06 PM
This is an amazing story, would love a sequel where the dad and son host an event for many butlers :P
8/14/21, 6:15 PM
This was amazing, I loved it. The opening scene on the subway was perfect - really got the exhibitionist in me going.