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9/29/20, 12:53 AM
This really had the makings of a great story, and was well written - but for me, it was missing the most important part: The setup and process of how Levi the "Thug" became Levi the "Baby". The story seems to cut straight to the aftermath.....after Levi had already been reprogrammed and brainwashed to be happy with his daddy. It would have been very hot to see the struggle, frustration and humiliation Levi experienced trying to futilely reject these changes before he finally got to this state. Honestly, had you not provided the summary at the top, i would have never realized Levi was ever a Thug in the first place. Perhaps a part 2 prologue? :)

8/11/21, 7:46 AM
Sorry about that. Was trying a different style of storytelling where we skip the first bits and join our story already in progress.@boyn2changes
9/29/20, 7:09 AM
Yeah, I need a prequel.

8/11/21, 7:45 AM
It is done!!! @ifitz
JR
10/4/20, 9:57 AM
There can be a twist to the next story if there is one. The couple that got Bradley are actually guys he slept with previously and they are there to help him out. Maybe there can be some revenge on Paul and he's turned into a dog or something else.

8/11/21, 7:45 AM
Interesting concept but not where I see this story going. This is a cheating dick getting his commuppance and making sure he cant hurt others again. I am working on a reverse hypno story soon. Stay tuned. @JR
12/23/20, 5:27 AM
I understand that people wanted to see more of the struggle against mind control, but in terms of storytelling, there's absolutely nothing wrong with starting in media res, provided you eventually fill the reader in sufficiently and you did. Very good job.

8/11/21, 7:44 AM
Thank you!!! @amul
Jun 12, 2020
1/30/21, 2:39 PM
Not usually into puppy play but I loved this story - please give us another chapter on Spunky's training.

8/11/21, 7:43 AM
I will give it my best shot! @Max Power
2/11/21, 2:39 PM
A nice big of mind-play! Awesome how Kevin turned into a compliant slut!

8/11/21, 7:42 AM
Of course! Gotta turn those silly straight boys into compliant little slave pups. @FreeThinker
2/12/21, 1:37 AM
Love the cocky straight guy get turned into a slutty bottom.

8/11/21, 7:42 AM
Hey same! One of my favorite topics. @Redcoma100
2/12/21, 1:28 AM
I hope you will make more chapters to this. This was hot to read.

8/11/21, 7:41 AM
This one is probably gonna be a one off. A friend got me thinking of what Jafar might have done if disney was rated R haha. @Redcoma100
2/12/21, 6:11 PM
More, please! You're a gifted writer.

8/11/21, 7:41 AM
I will try! I am trying to figure out how the other guys programming would have gone and how things would have progressed. @blankbot
2/16/21, 7:17 AM
lovely! would love to see the prequel where all of this is executed and Prince John earns victory over his enemies. Maybe with The Sheriff fucking Will Scarlet or Little John? Honestly, the bit with King Richard was *chefs kiss* On point, I'd assumed that Little John was going to get the baby treatment, but the way you executed it, was so much better.

8/11/21, 7:40 AM
Hmm I could maybe try something like that. Not sure how I would go about it. The appeal of this is it leaves the capture and indoctrination up to the readers mind. And I thought about making Little John the little. But I could not resist making the big strong king of england into a drooling little pants pisser. @Mind Labyrinth