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boi98229
8/11/21, 6:38 AM
So hot! Totally agree with the previous two comments.
boi98229
8/11/21, 6:19 AM
i love this story, but it was way too short for me. Things had just got started when it ended! It was kind of like being in a conversation on Grindr that is finally really getting hot, and i've fallen in lust! The guy tells me he is going to take me home so he and his boyfriend can tag-team fuck me all weekend, and then he just hangs up!! It's like i was really hot, and about to explode, and you just ruined my orgasm. And to make matters worse, you haven't added a second chapter since April!!
8/11/21, 3:31 AM
OK, first off: the sex scene was top quality. Top quality. That was some seriously good smut. As for the story that's developing and the characterization of Ronny, who is by turns a sexbeast but then regretful and vulnerable, and Fin who is putting up a good struggle against the transformations - well all I can say is that it leaves me wanting to know what will happen next. Not just wanting you to crank out some more smut, but I actually care about your characters now. So that's just awesome. Good job.
8/11/21, 2:54 AM
Great writing!
BottomBear29
8/10/21, 11:20 PM
I tried to continue, if someone can help with the sex scenes and stuff, i think this could make a great chapter for you preferably but anyone could jump off from.
8/10/21, 10:56 PM
This story is great! I love the muscle growth transformation, and the sex scene is ACHINGLY hot, but it's the humanity in the characters--especially in their post-coital talk--that makes the tale truly special. There are so many stories of cocky "alphas" (a term I hate) having their way with guys and showing no emotion beyond dominance and cruelty. You clearly distinguish between the lusty Ronnie and Fin and their true selves. Fantastic work!
8/10/21, 10:11 PM
so wholesome for such kinky topics, I'm looking forward to more being revealed.
8/10/21, 9:55 PM
Really looking forward to part 2.
8/9/21, 2:36 PM
Very hot senario. love the changes and a good happy ending

8/10/21, 9:47 PM
@Cadek Thank you! I do love a good ending, especially since this was also "kinda" about my struggles, I liked the idea of the light at the end of the tunnel.
8/9/21, 2:22 PM
oh this was cool I like World changing stories like these I wonder what will happen to Jim and Sam

8/10/21, 9:45 PM
@ForgottenCradle this was meant to be a one shot, but if I feel inspired I might try to give this a sequel, why not! Thanks a lot!