Recent Comments

8/11/21, 3:31 AM
OK, first off: the sex scene was top quality. Top quality. That was some seriously good smut. As for the story that's developing and the characterization of Ronny, who is by turns a sexbeast but then regretful and vulnerable, and Fin who is putting up a good struggle against the transformations - well all I can say is that it leaves me wanting to know what will happen next. Not just wanting you to crank out some more smut, but I actually care about your characters now. So that's just awesome. Good job.
8/11/21, 2:54 AM
Great writing!
BottomBear29
8/10/21, 11:20 PM
I tried to continue, if someone can help with the sex scenes and stuff, i think this could make a great chapter for you preferably but anyone could jump off from.
8/10/21, 10:56 PM
This story is great! I love the muscle growth transformation, and the sex scene is ACHINGLY hot, but it's the humanity in the characters--especially in their post-coital talk--that makes the tale truly special. There are so many stories of cocky "alphas" (a term I hate) having their way with guys and showing no emotion beyond dominance and cruelty. You clearly distinguish between the lusty Ronnie and Fin and their true selves. Fantastic work!
8/10/21, 10:11 PM
so wholesome for such kinky topics, I'm looking forward to more being revealed.
8/10/21, 9:55 PM
Really looking forward to part 2.
8/9/21, 2:36 PM
Very hot senario. love the changes and a good happy ending

8/10/21, 9:47 PM
@Cadek Thank you! I do love a good ending, especially since this was also "kinda" about my struggles, I liked the idea of the light at the end of the tunnel.
8/9/21, 2:22 PM
oh this was cool I like World changing stories like these I wonder what will happen to Jim and Sam

8/10/21, 9:45 PM
@ForgottenCradle this was meant to be a one shot, but if I feel inspired I might try to give this a sequel, why not! Thanks a lot!
8/10/21, 9:43 PM
Great follow up, I really enjoyed the uncontrollable lust they both experiment while at it, followed by the more tender afterglow. Ronny is quite intriguing now!
Anonymous
8/10/21, 8:45 AM
Hot!

8/10/21, 8:02 PM
Thanks!