Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/10/21, 2:30 PM
loved this! hope you write more world change stuff in the future :)
Anonymous
8/10/21, 11:07 AM
i wish this story would continue! its so hot!
8/10/21, 10:53 AM
Such a great series
8/10/21, 10:32 AM
Excellent beginning! You're a fantastic writer.
Anonymous
8/10/21, 7:18 AM
Really great descriptions of Charles; would love to read more in this setting
8/10/21, 7:04 AM
just great really, can't wait to read more
8/10/21, 6:59 AM
I love collars too. Nice touch regarding the foreign language. Now I want to know more about this part. ;)
8/10/21, 6:17 AM
Thank you everyone for the kind comments! Definitely encouraged me to keep going. I'm writing part 2 right now and have some ideas as to where the story is headed. And don't worry, Ricardo and Eric will be included in parts to come!
8/10/21, 4:16 AM
hot, can't wait to see how it ends.
Anonymous
8/10/21, 3:06 AM
Very interesting; love to see the novel appearance of breasts