Recent Comments

8/10/21, 10:56 PM
This story is great! I love the muscle growth transformation, and the sex scene is ACHINGLY hot, but it's the humanity in the characters--especially in their post-coital talk--that makes the tale truly special. There are so many stories of cocky "alphas" (a term I hate) having their way with guys and showing no emotion beyond dominance and cruelty. You clearly distinguish between the lusty Ronnie and Fin and their true selves. Fantastic work!
8/10/21, 10:11 PM
so wholesome for such kinky topics, I'm looking forward to more being revealed.
8/10/21, 9:55 PM
Really looking forward to part 2.
8/9/21, 2:36 PM
Very hot senario. love the changes and a good happy ending

8/10/21, 9:47 PM
@Cadek Thank you! I do love a good ending, especially since this was also "kinda" about my struggles, I liked the idea of the light at the end of the tunnel.
8/9/21, 2:22 PM
oh this was cool I like World changing stories like these I wonder what will happen to Jim and Sam

8/10/21, 9:45 PM
@ForgottenCradle this was meant to be a one shot, but if I feel inspired I might try to give this a sequel, why not! Thanks a lot!
8/10/21, 9:43 PM
Great follow up, I really enjoyed the uncontrollable lust they both experiment while at it, followed by the more tender afterglow. Ronny is quite intriguing now!
Anonymous
8/10/21, 8:45 AM
Hot!

8/10/21, 8:02 PM
Thanks!
8/10/21, 7:52 PM
Good set up. Hopefully a more thorough conversion utilizing sex is to come.
8/10/21, 7:06 PM
One of those stories that I never want to end, I so enjoyed it and it's seminal (both definitions apply!) to TommyHawk's "Planet of Desire" I would so love to see more exploration of this universe/planet.
8/10/21, 5:35 PM
Enjoyed this chapter, including its surprise ending!

8/10/21, 5:48 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! The next chapter is almost finished, and I'm looking forward to sharing Julian with you all :3!