Recent Comments

8/10/21, 6:59 AM
I love collars too. Nice touch regarding the foreign language. Now I want to know more about this part. ;)
8/10/21, 6:17 AM
Thank you everyone for the kind comments! Definitely encouraged me to keep going. I'm writing part 2 right now and have some ideas as to where the story is headed. And don't worry, Ricardo and Eric will be included in parts to come!
8/10/21, 4:16 AM
hot, can't wait to see how it ends.
Anonymous
8/10/21, 3:06 AM
Very interesting; love to see the novel appearance of breasts
Anonymous
8/10/21, 2:50 AM
Hope we see more of Ricardo and Eric in the follow up!
8/10/21, 12:42 AM
Never managed to make it to the end without cumming. will keep trying!
8/10/21, 12:31 AM
Fuck, that was hot, esp near the end. I'm really enjoying the scent theme and the rank smell of man and pits and hair. As someone commented above, cock fur would be a nice addition. An indication of a good series is when I think of the series during the day while doing an activity or project, and get excited about reading the next chapter that evening. That happened today, so well done!!
Griff
8/8/21, 9:49 PM
Always come back to wank on this one. It's great.

8/10/21, 12:25 AM
Thanks @Griff! That’s the biggest compliment I can imagine :)
8/9/21, 11:44 PM
Please continue this!
8/9/21, 10:09 PM
Thanks for posting this. It's really well written and structured. Unlike the Jake story, where I felt so bad for his forced transformation (yes, he was a bit of a jerk but he had worked hard for his, body, business and lifestyle) i thoroughly enjoyed 'seeing' Matty twinked. He had demeaned Frank and made him feel unworthy and nobody deserves that. So, Matty being changed feel right and appropriate. Maybe Matty will continue to be a self entitled jerk or cheat on Frank and then be forced in to waddling obesity? It would serve him right - and be a pleasure to read. Thanks for your hard work and sharing your creativity with us all.