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8/9/21, 11:21 AM
This was excellent, particularly for a first story. Impressive. I enjoyed your characters and the mind-control aspect was well-handled with a good slow build-up.
8/9/21, 10:02 AM
Great first story! Can't wait to see where this is going :) welcome to the club ;)
8/9/21, 7:39 AM
Some very hot images here, especially when you depict the mass enslavement of the men in town. As someone who's not very familiar with Steven Universe, I would have appreciated a bit more description of the characters. Overall, it felt a little rough, but I'd love to see you write more stories in this vein.
8/9/21, 7:22 AM
Nice story. is there going to be a sequel.
8/9/21, 7:12 AM
Hope more is to come.
8/9/21, 7:11 AM
Ok, so, like, I loved EVERYTHING about this story. The beginning, the catch, the loss of time, the feeling of being pulled in so willingly to his spell. The absolute lustful part between the two, mmf. I mean, I don’t want to talk about everything in the comments, cause I don’t want to ruin it, but that was so wonderful to read! I always enjoy getting wrapped up in a well written story, imagining I am there. And I quite enjoyed myself quite a bit, if you know what I mean, right around3/4s in, and out of wonderment and curiosity of the story I continued. And I fucking LOVED it! As a subject that wants complete loss of control that fear drives me so deep into this kink. So well done!
8/9/21, 7:03 AM
Hottt. hope more is to come for Matt and Jared. Keep it up.
8/9/21, 6:50 AM
Congrats! You’ve written a splendid first story!!! If I had to nitpick then there’s like one or two grammatical things that could be better, but the flow and character development is great!!! Good job :)
8/9/21, 6:46 AM
Great. look forward to seeing more of this story, it's one of my favorite
8/9/21, 6:02 AM
I always look forward to reading more from you @malskin ! You never disappoint.