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Aug 7, 2021
Anonymous
8/8/21, 6:23 AM
Hot and sweet!

8/8/21, 7:44 PM
Glad you liked it!!
8/8/21, 7:10 PM
Nice story, you should continue it
8/8/21, 5:55 PM
Great Chapter, I hope that the re programmed Grayson will come to the rescue of His creator, subdue the guards and force them into a suit. that way they can turn on the General
8/8/21, 5:10 PM
This was a great series!
8/8/21, 3:11 PM
I loved this-the emotional conflict and shock from our young wizard(which many stories don't address), the backfire, the gradual world change, and, of course, the public sex and oblivious nudity. The descriptions are sexy as well(especially the newscast, the demure yet exceptionally attractive Property Brothers, and the "good-ole-boy" country musicians jerking each other off even more than usual). Another winner here, and as others have mentioned, the pervasive "Twilight Zone"-esque specter of existential horror gives plenty of food for thought.
8/8/21, 12:14 AM
This was pretty good but I tire of the "bullied gay teen becomes a rapist to get revenge" sub-genre.

Cracker
8/8/21, 11:13 AM
Hi. First, thanks for writing. I have to disagree with you. As the writer, I can say that this is not a story about a bully and a teen getting revenge. It's a story about dominance and submission. That said, I'm curious? If you don't like such stories and , you think this is such a story, why are you reading it? This is not a criticism but ...Again thank you for taking the trouble to write.@amul

8/8/21, 1:47 PM
@Cracker Appreciate your response. To your question; if the story description had indicated this was a high school bully story, I would have given it a pass and would not have left feedback. As is the case when I am critical of a story because it is "not for me" I did not rate your story as that would be unfair. You're not wrong that I am not the intended audience for your story.

Cracker
8/8/21, 2:57 PM
At the risk of being disagreeable. It is not a high school bully story. You might think it is but,in my view, you're mistaken. Anyway, let's not beat this horse to death. In the future know that my stories will have similar themes. So,,skip. :-)@amul
8/8/21, 2:10 PM
By all means... don't hold back on the "self-indulgent" stories. Please. Pretty please.
Mindwhisperer
8/8/21, 2:01 PM
Okay for what it was. I am always amused when people write things like, "I hope you have Max mind control Aaron more!" People really have got to stop equating drugging someone with controlling them through *mind control*. Anyone who can procure the right chemicals can drug someone, controlling a person's will is a totally different matter.
8/8/21, 1:19 PM
That rescue party is in for one hell of a surprise. I loved everything about this story from beginning to end.
Doug
8/4/21, 10:19 AM
please please please let us have part 2 I have read and re-read this so many times

8/4/21, 11:24 AM
@Doug I'm working on it, I swear there will be three chapters in all. I know the whole story in my head, its just a matter of getting it all down in a sexy and entertaining way. I've just been going through some personal issues and looking for a job. But I promise Chapter 2 will be along in a couple of weeks if not sooner. Thank you for the inspirational nudge. :)

Doug
8/8/21, 12:27 PM
thank you very much @Pup Don