Recent Comments

Scotty
8/8/21, 6:28 PM
ya, I agree. No stds. However I do hope his drug use gets really bad and begins to permanently damage his mind!

8/8/21, 9:18 PM
@Scotty sure thing, , Kyle still have a long journey in front of him, and a good amount of things to taste and experience 😉
Anonymous
8/8/21, 8:41 PM
Love this!
8/8/21, 8:23 PM
i don't know why, but collars always seem to do it for me. i would love to read more. maybe hear the story about the father. WoOF Unruly
8/8/21, 7:50 PM
Nice story. hope there is more to come.
Aug 7, 2021
Anonymous
8/8/21, 6:23 AM
Hot and sweet!

8/8/21, 7:44 PM
Glad you liked it!!
8/8/21, 7:10 PM
Nice story, you should continue it
8/8/21, 5:55 PM
Great Chapter, I hope that the re programmed Grayson will come to the rescue of His creator, subdue the guards and force them into a suit. that way they can turn on the General
8/8/21, 5:10 PM
This was a great series!
8/8/21, 3:11 PM
I loved this-the emotional conflict and shock from our young wizard(which many stories don't address), the backfire, the gradual world change, and, of course, the public sex and oblivious nudity. The descriptions are sexy as well(especially the newscast, the demure yet exceptionally attractive Property Brothers, and the "good-ole-boy" country musicians jerking each other off even more than usual). Another winner here, and as others have mentioned, the pervasive "Twilight Zone"-esque specter of existential horror gives plenty of food for thought.
8/8/21, 12:14 AM
This was pretty good but I tire of the "bullied gay teen becomes a rapist to get revenge" sub-genre.

Cracker
8/8/21, 11:13 AM
Hi. First, thanks for writing. I have to disagree with you. As the writer, I can say that this is not a story about a bully and a teen getting revenge. It's a story about dominance and submission. That said, I'm curious? If you don't like such stories and , you think this is such a story, why are you reading it? This is not a criticism but ...Again thank you for taking the trouble to write.@amul

8/8/21, 1:47 PM
@Cracker Appreciate your response. To your question; if the story description had indicated this was a high school bully story, I would have given it a pass and would not have left feedback. As is the case when I am critical of a story because it is "not for me" I did not rate your story as that would be unfair. You're not wrong that I am not the intended audience for your story.

Cracker
8/8/21, 2:57 PM
At the risk of being disagreeable. It is not a high school bully story. You might think it is but,in my view, you're mistaken. Anyway, let's not beat this horse to death. In the future know that my stories will have similar themes. So,,skip. :-)@amul