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8/8/21, 12:45 AM
I'm hungry for pre-cum now!! And lots of it!
8/7/21, 11:57 PM
Very well-written. I hoped we would find out exactly why the narrator was being affected by his own subliminals but I respect the total commitment to the 1st person narrative structure.
8/7/21, 11:32 PM
Wonderful!
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8/7/21, 11:11 PM
Please continue this story. I want to see what kind of punishment the older brothers get.
8/6/21, 9:01 AM
Very hot story, I always like the stories resulting from your trips ;)

8/7/21, 10:42 PM
@Transformheaven I forgot to mention the funniest part: I actually started writing this story *while* I was on the nude beach in Kiev. I was sitting there naked typing away on my laptop, my dick getting a bit plumper every time I came up with a particularly arousing line. I got a little sand in my USB ports, but it was worth it!
8/7/21, 9:39 PM
Hot and conscise as always, Hypnothrill! The way you describe the oblivion universe always hits all the right buttons for me. I see that now Calvin will be in a way truly sinned and punished forever by his own fantasies...he'll forever be the lone person in the world to know what's truly happening and I guess he won't be able to fall in line with his own new reality because he is not affected by his spell. A VERY valuable life lesson indeed...lol.
Toughluck
8/7/21, 9:28 PM
EXTREMELY HOT. Thanks for this great piece, I loved it!
Kip
8/7/21, 9:23 PM
Glad I checked out some of your stories! This was really damn hot all through the entire tale. Love thinking about that brand new world of male sexual energy! (And definitely felt some of that sexual energy through the read) ;)
8/7/21, 4:52 PM
wow, things are escalating, I hope to see more, like turning an arrogant jock into an artsy (but not campy) theater geek

8/7/21, 8:55 PM
@darkblade2814 - that's a great idea. Glad you enjoyed it man
8/7/21, 6:37 PM
Loved it! Entertaining and hot!!