Recent Comments

Doug
8/4/21, 10:19 AM
please please please let us have part 2 I have read and re-read this so many times

8/4/21, 11:24 AM
@Doug I'm working on it, I swear there will be three chapters in all. I know the whole story in my head, its just a matter of getting it all down in a sexy and entertaining way. I've just been going through some personal issues and looking for a job. But I promise Chapter 2 will be along in a couple of weeks if not sooner. Thank you for the inspirational nudge. :)

Doug
8/8/21, 12:27 PM
thank you very much @Pup Don
8/8/21, 12:14 PM
An incredibly hot conclusion to a great series! Would love to read a sequel.
BravelyShy
8/8/21, 11:17 AM
The fourth paragraph is really hard to read. It's far too long, with so much dialogue crammed together. There should only ever be one speaker in each paragraph, even if that makes it a sentence a paragraph. That's my only real complaint, though. Sure, there are a few spelling and grammar errors here or there, but not so many to distract me aside from that wall of text. Interesting premise otherwise, and it'll be interesting to see how it goes.
8/8/21, 8:42 AM
This has a bit of Everything and just gets me sooo horny. Love
8/8/21, 7:43 AM
Great story from beginning to end. With the rest of the planet to explore, the rescue team arriving and the possible threat of civil war I can't help but hold out hope for a sequel.
Za
8/8/21, 4:59 AM
I look forward to the next chapter!
8/8/21, 3:37 AM
cock will always win
Anonymous
8/8/21, 3:11 AM
Good follow up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/8/21, 2:57 AM
I'm so glad you are coming back to this story and characters. I love this couple and would enjoy reading all that happens to them the rest of the way through their senior year and into college. I do hope for a HEA (Happily Ever After).
8/8/21, 12:45 AM
I'm hungry for pre-cum now!! And lots of it!