Recent Comments

Zai
8/7/21, 3:29 PM
Dude! where are chapters 1 thru 3? and where are the final chapters? when Tommy fucks Bart? Donnie fucks Clark|Superboy, aka Cunt? they used to be on this site? what gives, man??? I recall Donnie dragging his bitch onto the football field to pop his pussy cherry. and I remember Donnie excited to rape and own Clark|Superman. please resubmit the missing chapters, dude!!!
8/7/21, 2:27 PM
Gonna have to agree with the comment above. You can say they're 18 in the text but by invoking well known, canonically 10 year old characters from a franchise made for children, you can't escape the association. In fact, as far as I can tell, their age or the time passed doesn't have much of anything to do with the story. I'll go so far as to say this story seems very much like it was written with the 10 year old characters in mind and then you added some lines referring to them as 18 or 19. All of this could be avoided by simply writing an original story with original teenage characters.
Fantasma
8/4/21, 4:07 PM
Welcome back. Had a feeling that you had abandoned here but glad to hear the life is turning around man. Keep up the great work. Emits transformation has gone great and he is at a point he deserved to be. The "forgetting" part at the start had me worried but can be seen as temporary i guess? I am waiting for the chapters that contains Eric's "redemption" arc. always had a spot for a "big cop small top" thing goin for me which i think you will satisfy greatly. Again keep up the good work and please if anything happens take your time. Hope the Best for ya.

Blackjinx123
8/7/21, 1:50 PM
@Fantasma, thank you so much for your support and I'm so glad you have enjoyed the series so far. i have no plans to quite on this story, i have too much fun writing it!
8/5/21, 11:00 AM
Glad to see this one is still alive! Great work, love that Emit now knows his place, I wonder how the brothers will react to his father’s new role in the house

Blackjinx123
8/7/21, 1:39 PM
@zeeker8b, yup! better later than never right? XD thanks so much for the support and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
8/7/21, 11:56 AM
The temple of Doom always got me going when he was transformed

8/7/21, 1:36 PM
@MalSkin Yes!
8/4/21, 5:01 PM
beautifully intimate. I can't wait to see Vincent do the same with Erik and Eli too

Blackjinx123
8/7/21, 1:34 PM
@ForgottenCradle, thank you so much!
8/7/21, 11:14 AM
I loved the story. My only critic is that I wish when he topped the former top it wasn't so rushed. Still better than anything I could write. Part 2?

Cracker
8/7/21, 11:18 AM
Hey thanks. I'm not sure if there's going to be a part two. Hiwever, I never say never. I just felt, when I finished part one and the postscript, that I pretty much said all I wanted to say. My idea was that the reader has a better imagination about to what happened then I could ever write. I simply you set out a brief idea to fill in . @tanners92
8/7/21, 10:54 AM
now THAT is the Indiana Jones sequel I approve
8/7/21, 10:28 AM
really like the PE teacher and his son become beta boys good job
LOVE IT!
8/7/21, 10:08 AM
BEST STORIES I'VE READ IN THIS PLATFORM SO FAR. Please make raunchier stories, similar to chapter 1 and 2. It's your world and u can make it as you see it fit. Maybe u can make having sex is still possible and safe even when Lucas is pregnant.