Recent Comments

8/6/21, 6:43 PM
Great story! Thanks again for another wonderfully written story. I'm still wondering about something; I see no curse though.

8/6/21, 9:40 PM
@Gay_Genes I suppose it's all a matter of perspective, but Calvin at least feels cursed by guilt over what he's done.
8/6/21, 8:37 PM
I love when families get together and have a happy ending. Thanks! This story was wonderful!
8/6/21, 4:02 PM
1) I'd watch a TV series of this. Better plot than many shows I've watched all year 2) You HAD to bring in Cuomo and the Property Brothers in,huh?! That really pushed my buttons, I like your taste in TV personalities. Again,a well-written story about reality change and obliviousness, my favorite things. Great job. Perfectly done
8/6/21, 3:25 AM
I seriously love this story. So hot and sexy!

8/6/21, 4:00 PM
@Heru Kane thank you.
Anonymous
8/6/21, 3:40 PM
Ash Ketchum is canonically 10 years old. I can’t really get past that.
8/6/21, 2:41 PM
WELCOME BACK! Good to see this series continue. it's such a cute story. The idea of adding more to Dave's family is cool. And those alpha powers? interesting
8/6/21, 2:36 PM
What can I add to the comments already made so eloquently by those who came before me? My adoration, I suppose. This series continues to be fun and clever and lighthearted and and hot I can't wait to dig into the next next chapters!
8/6/21, 2:30 PM
I’m practically starving for Dad and Son. Please please please.
Kip
8/6/21, 2:05 PM
That was fantastic. I've been enjoying your stories for years, but that was particularly well designed and HOT. You're an inspiration for me as I think about designing world change stories. The only problem I can see with this story is I'm reading this at my desk at work and now my dick is pressing painfully against my zipper. Thanks, Hypnothrill. ;)
Anonymous
8/6/21, 1:54 PM
a new favorite!