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8/6/21, 7:27 AM
I love it! Wish there are more, but it been eleven years already. Hope the author still doing well.
Gasuda
8/6/21, 7:14 AM
This is the hottest thing I've read on GSS in ages.
8/6/21, 6:56 AM
Great story as always
8/6/21, 5:13 AM
This was a very well thought out series. Thank you for writing!
8/6/21, 4:58 AM
I need the second part of this story, omg
8/6/21, 2:53 AM
Loving how this story developed so far, and can't wait for the next chapter.

8/6/21, 3:51 AM
Thanks! New chapter should be out soonish. @Dreamweavr
8/5/21, 10:04 AM
awwwwwwwwww no! I can't believe it's over now.. this was SO GOOD I loved every single thing about it

8/6/21, 3:48 AM
@ForgottenCradle I'm glad you enjoyed it! You can keep an eye out for a follow up one day in the future
Nutiper
8/4/21, 8:41 PM
So Brad and Collin had *both* been straight, frat-bro friends all along—! Before Vitaliy swooped in and distorted their friendship to play out a fantasy... The *entire* dynamic was fabricated from scratch by Vitaliy, and he was more "in charge" of the whole set-up than we could possibly have guessed... Were you planning on doing that epilogue after all, or still not sure? Having read all four chapters, I do get curious about the events *past* Chapter One (aka, what happens chronologically *after* the events of Chapter One) and how things progress further... Especially with knowing Vitaliy is part of the the mix, and wondering how that will go for Brad and Collin. (Does he step in at some point? Do Brad or Collin get a hold of *Vitaliy's* app and make changes?) It also makes me wonder if there's a story behind Vitaliy getting the app, too — maybe even someone behind Vitaliy, in the way that Vitaliy is behind Brad and Collin...? But that's pure speculation on my end, and possibly not relevant. The main story does seem to be about Brad and Collin's shifting dynamic, so that's where my eye goes when wondering if you had an epilogue planned or not. Definitely don't feel pressured, though! If this feels like the correct end to you, sans epilogue, then end it here! Also I will just add that some of Vitaliy's pseudo-Russified versions of English expressions cracked me up. Especially: > And now we have our alone time without that Dmitri downer

8/6/21, 3:47 AM
@Nutiper I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I've appreciated your thoughtful comments. I do agree the plot almost begs for a follow up in the present between the fully transformed Brad and Collin and Vitaliy. Maybe I'll get around to it one day. I hadn't even thought about a Vitaliy origin story, but that may be an interesting spin off!
8/5/21, 1:02 AM
This is a wonderfully clever idea, a combination of regression, corporate espionage, and infantilism. I do however want to offer some mild critique on how it is presented. The lack of line spacing during the dialogue between the higher-up and the doctor made some parts of their conversation muddled, with it sometimes bleeding into one another while the mind digests the story. Beyond that, I genuinely commend this work!

8/6/21, 1:56 AM
@FatteningLionBoi thanks for the comments. i'm currently working on edits, including a new prequel. stay tuned.
Jan 16, 2013
8/6/21, 12:44 AM
true cure for straying