Recent Comments

8/6/21, 8:37 PM
I love when families get together and have a happy ending. Thanks! This story was wonderful!
8/6/21, 4:02 PM
1) I'd watch a TV series of this. Better plot than many shows I've watched all year 2) You HAD to bring in Cuomo and the Property Brothers in,huh?! That really pushed my buttons, I like your taste in TV personalities. Again,a well-written story about reality change and obliviousness, my favorite things. Great job. Perfectly done
8/6/21, 3:25 AM
I seriously love this story. So hot and sexy!

8/6/21, 4:00 PM
@Heru Kane thank you.
Anonymous
8/6/21, 3:40 PM
Ash Ketchum is canonically 10 years old. I can’t really get past that.
8/6/21, 2:41 PM
WELCOME BACK! Good to see this series continue. it's such a cute story. The idea of adding more to Dave's family is cool. And those alpha powers? interesting
8/6/21, 2:36 PM
What can I add to the comments already made so eloquently by those who came before me? My adoration, I suppose. This series continues to be fun and clever and lighthearted and and hot I can't wait to dig into the next next chapters!
8/6/21, 2:30 PM
I’m practically starving for Dad and Son. Please please please.
Kip
8/6/21, 2:05 PM
That was fantastic. I've been enjoying your stories for years, but that was particularly well designed and HOT. You're an inspiration for me as I think about designing world change stories. The only problem I can see with this story is I'm reading this at my desk at work and now my dick is pressing painfully against my zipper. Thanks, Hypnothrill. ;)
Anonymous
8/6/21, 1:54 PM
a new favorite!
8/6/21, 1:25 PM
What an incredible story! I especially like the slow reveal at the beginning: the gradual revelations of just how much the world has changed (first it's just ogling, then they're having public sex, then they're naked, then the women are oblivious...). The description of the overall changed world is hot as well (BOY are the Property Brothers attractive). And as ever, there's the hint of horror lurking just below the surface: if memory is altered, then how can we know reality? Are facts subject to our memory? Amazing work, Hypnothrill! :)