Recent Comments

8/6/21, 12:15 PM
Very hot story! You're a master of stories with obliviousness and world change. I noticed that in this story you addressed two themes you normally don't: how it all began and what happens with the women. Both were expertly handled. Great work!
8/6/21, 12:06 PM
glad the pups are back... I've missed these guys
8/6/21, 9:33 AM
nice
8/6/21, 8:25 AM
I'm a bit tardy to the party but an excellent story as ever. I'm especially impressed with how you managed to write around the pictures you used. I think the confusion and fear at the end added a perfect dark little twist to the story. It is, in the context of their brainwashing, sweet like many have said, but at the same the moments of confusion beforehand and the stark reality of what's really happening are oh so horrifying in a good way. Wonderful job, my hat is off to you.

8/6/21, 8:43 AM
@Mr. Sandman Thanks so much for the feedback! I hope you're doing well; it's been too long since we've had a new story from you. "Frat Brothers of the Corn" and "Montana Jackson" are two of my favorites in recent years.
8/6/21, 7:27 AM
I love it! Wish there are more, but it been eleven years already. Hope the author still doing well.
Gasuda
8/6/21, 7:14 AM
This is the hottest thing I've read on GSS in ages.
8/6/21, 6:56 AM
Great story as always
8/6/21, 5:13 AM
This was a very well thought out series. Thank you for writing!
8/6/21, 4:58 AM
I need the second part of this story, omg
8/6/21, 2:53 AM
Loving how this story developed so far, and can't wait for the next chapter.

8/6/21, 3:51 AM
Thanks! New chapter should be out soonish. @Dreamweavr