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8/5/21, 1:56 PM
Fuck! Another hot "alpha" takedown, well done @Cracker. Loved the in-person setting for this one.

Cracker
8/5/21, 1:59 PM
wow thanks so much@Mr Jack Off

8/5/21, 2:03 PM
@Cracker, of course! Your stories are some of my all-time favs man. Always excited when you post a new one!! keep it up, cant wait for the next
8/5/21, 1:55 PM
I. LOVED. THIS! You could do the whole Grimms faery tales.
8/5/21, 12:05 PM
This is incredibly sweet - and I love the historical setting too! Well done!

8/5/21, 1:19 PM
@Dace Thanks for the encouraging words!
8/5/21, 12:06 PM
You can crack alphas, jocks and bros all you want. I love it, although I guess he could have said even more humiliating things. :D

Anonymous
8/5/21, 12:33 PM
Oh I am sure which, is why I let the reader imagine it. They will probably be much hotter than my ideas @Wolfboy
8/5/21, 11:42 AM
Awesome continuation! Great job!
8/5/21, 11:08 AM
I like it, and am looking forward to the next chapter.
8/5/21, 10:26 AM
This was great! Pits andpup play together. 😍🤤

8/5/21, 11:02 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk Thanks! I was afraid of shoving too many things in it, so getting your approval is great (your stories are more than inspiring)!
Anonymous
8/5/21, 6:53 AM
I thought it was hot. I liked how this one wasn't just an online cyber story like some of your others, and they really had sex. Really liked the humiliation, but wish that his humiliation was drawn out more and the story continued (instead of having the postscript summary).

Cracker
8/5/21, 10:55 AM
hi. I debated that but felt the story accomplished what I intended and the reader's imagination would do it @
8/5/21, 8:22 AM
Former nerd takes down alpha jock? Yes please! Excellent setup and fun execution (switching perspectives - worked great). WoOF!

Cracker
8/5/21, 10:53 AM
thanks@Unruly Dogboy
Monstermash62
10/15/18, 2:07 PM
I got feedback on this story that the ending didn't make sense because the narrator doesn't know he was punished and Mark rewards him kind of in the end. I did a revised version somewhere, but in that version I made the narrator only able to come if Mark fucked him. Rereading it now, I think it would've been better to have made it so that Mark taunts and humiliates the narrator for being so dumb. Maybe even made it so that the narrator can only get off if he's being told he's stupid or a moron, and put into situations that he can't get out of without help from someone smarter than him.

8/5/21, 10:53 AM
@Monstermash62 I didn't mind the ending. The narrator's crime wasn't really very severe so it would have been weird if the focus had been on cruelty and punishment.