Recent Comments

8/4/21, 6:03 PM
I had to pretend the protagonist wasn't morbidly obese, but this story was fantastic. Hope to read more.
8/1/21, 5:19 PM
finally, youre back!

Blackjinx123
8/4/21, 2:17 AM
@Erratic101 yes! sorry for the wait, i hope you enjoyed it!

8/4/21, 4:57 PM
@Blackjinx123 enjoy is a weak word to describe how I love this series. I hope to see more installment and please enslave his dad, that's my only request!
8/4/21, 4:34 PM
great story. thank you
8/4/21, 3:43 PM
I hope to see more eventually
8/4/21, 3:29 PM
Glad I finally go around to reading this one. Very imaginative and cleverly executed!
8/4/21, 3:12 PM
Will there be more chapters?? This was a hit story
Gingcub
8/4/21, 12:40 PM
please let there be a week 3 :)
Doug
8/4/21, 12:07 PM
please please please post the next installment
8/4/21, 10:40 AM
Let see how things go from now on
8/4/21, 8:11 AM
I really like this story, it's a great start ! To me, the mind control parts could be a bit more detailed, like with Noah and the Master : "*the god whispered hypnotic, delightful things into his head. [...] The hushes were so euphoric he could barely hear the last of his free will shouting faintly in protest.*" I'd love to read more about Noah's internal resistance, or what's happening inside him as he succumbs to the Master. At this point he seems like an important character and I want to associate more deeply with him as he got under control. I hope we'll see a following soon ! I'm curious about the Master... I'm sure I'd love to submit to him and join his army ;)