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7/30/21, 11:46 PM
will we see part 2 soon?

8/2/21, 1:57 AM
@darkblade2814 It's being edited! It's over twice as long, so it's slow-going, but it's been done! Part 3 will take a lot longer, we're writing it real slowly but we write for it basically every day.

8/2/21, 6:03 AM
@Soren Fitz I see, thank you for the update
8/2/21, 4:39 AM
It's lovely to read this story which is both incredibly hot and also avoids so many of the common tropes.
4/1/20, 10:11 PM
The mind control being linked to the exercise is a very nice touch, but why did he need to dumb Benjamin down? He could've controlled him without dumbing him down; I get that it might be authorial preference, but from the world of the story this seems a bit unnecessary IMO.

8/2/21, 4:14 AM
@New Guy in Town That was the client's request, remember?
8/2/21, 3:42 AM
This is the kind of story that leads me back to this website.
8/2/21, 3:06 AM
Wow, this was a hot story and so well-written.
8/2/21, 1:40 AM
This was nice! Sweet with a happy ending but then yeah, some people will never be satisfied no matter how perfect it goes :)

8/2/21, 1:50 AM
@MonsterMash62 Thanks! My original ending had Bheeshma being satisfied, but I made a last-minute change to what it is. To be honest I'm on the fence about it, so I definitely appreciate your kind words :)

8/2/21, 1:54 AM
I liked it. Made the story more clever. Kind of gave it a message :) @Noam de Pluma
8/1/21, 2:51 PM
Echoing others, I loved how the hypnosis was subtle and fast at the same time. Loved how you wrote the two jocks' bodies too, yum. Thanks for posting! Would love to read more about this coach's escapades.

8/2/21, 1:50 AM
Hi @tenser13, thank you! It's great to hear, especially on older stories, that people liked them. While I'm not sure about this particular coach, magic whistles and training straight guys in slutty sportswear is definitely a theme worth revisiting.
Aug 1, 2021
8/1/21, 9:52 PM
Great to see you back writing stories; definitely like the whole scent memories premise of this story. I'm looking forward to see where you go with this.

8/2/21, 12:53 AM
@New Guy in Town thank you!
8/2/21, 12:15 AM
that ending was a bit ominous

8/2/21, 12:38 AM
@darkblade2814 Hmm. Wasn't aiming for ominous. More of a harmless 'jeez, some people will never be satisfied' kind of thing. Ah, well. Thanks for reading!

8/2/21, 12:41 AM
@Noam de Pluma, I see, well, that was a relief
Aug 1, 2021
8/1/21, 11:54 PM
Fun read. Got my cock hard in my jeans.