Recent Comments

8/2/21, 7:59 AM
Hotttt. hope more is to come.
8/2/21, 7:18 AM
This has been so good ! ! Pits are my fave, and so this is wonderful. 🥰
Anonymous
8/2/21, 6:47 AM
This was so hot. I am personally a fan of parasite being overpowered and dominating superman/superheroes. I read and masturbated to this before I slept and when I woke up the next morning I had a hard on thinking about the story. I hope you continue to write more because your writing is amazing!
Aug 1, 2021
Toughluck
8/2/21, 6:41 AM
SUPER hot. Great pacing, loved it!
7/30/21, 11:46 PM
will we see part 2 soon?

8/2/21, 1:57 AM
@darkblade2814 It's being edited! It's over twice as long, so it's slow-going, but it's been done! Part 3 will take a lot longer, we're writing it real slowly but we write for it basically every day.

8/2/21, 6:03 AM
@Soren Fitz I see, thank you for the update
8/2/21, 4:39 AM
It's lovely to read this story which is both incredibly hot and also avoids so many of the common tropes.
4/1/20, 10:11 PM
The mind control being linked to the exercise is a very nice touch, but why did he need to dumb Benjamin down? He could've controlled him without dumbing him down; I get that it might be authorial preference, but from the world of the story this seems a bit unnecessary IMO.

8/2/21, 4:14 AM
@New Guy in Town That was the client's request, remember?
8/2/21, 3:42 AM
This is the kind of story that leads me back to this website.
8/2/21, 3:06 AM
Wow, this was a hot story and so well-written.
8/2/21, 1:40 AM
This was nice! Sweet with a happy ending but then yeah, some people will never be satisfied no matter how perfect it goes :)

8/2/21, 1:50 AM
@MonsterMash62 Thanks! My original ending had Bheeshma being satisfied, but I made a last-minute change to what it is. To be honest I'm on the fence about it, so I definitely appreciate your kind words :)

8/2/21, 1:54 AM
I liked it. Made the story more clever. Kind of gave it a message :) @Noam de Pluma