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Aug 1, 2021
8/1/21, 6:18 PM
Wow this was hot!

8/1/21, 6:38 PM
@Cutlerfan, thank you!
8/1/21, 6:24 PM
One of my favorite story lines! I've read through twice now. would dearly love to know how Ginger finally gets put in his place, and what becomes of the lascivious Merk. please! Tie up these loose ends! I'd love to see Ginger become a slutty bottom by the end. ;)
Aug 1, 2021
8/1/21, 6:01 PM
Mutabear you're the best🤤 ❤️
Aug 1, 2021
8/1/21, 5:25 PM
so, this is a five parter?

8/1/21, 5:42 PM
@darkblade2814, this is at least five parts, one for each character, one when the come back together, although it could go into an extra story or two depending on how in depth the last part goes...

8/1/21, 5:43 PM
@Jeep I see, good luck on the project
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8/1/21, 5:28 PM
How have I not commented on this before! Nutiper, you are (as always) a supremely talented writer who has a real flare for both intrigue, flamingly hot passages as well as fitting and wonderful humour (see: the egg's off switch). I really look forward to seeing whatever you write next!
8/1/21, 4:19 PM
I love the detail of exponential complexity that would take a collective mind to understand. (Dan(2of9of2of2) ejaculated against (1of9of1of2) and continued to make out in perfect harmony, aware that the Standard Form had departed whilst they had been quietly assimilating). Great attention to detail. I'm envious!
Jul 31, 2021
7/31/21, 6:23 PM
My god, that was hot. please do a sequel to this.

8/1/21, 1:13 PM
@Jonanator Glad it got you excited. We'll see about a sequel.

8/1/21, 4:17 PM
@ControlMe Yeah. I know what you intended it to be, but, it was so great. it could turn out to be a great series.
7/30/21, 9:56 PM
I like this one, will we see more? if you accept suggestions, why now show the principal getting dominated by his secretary and the coach becoming the theater teacher's bitch?

8/1/21, 3:58 PM
@darkblade2814 Hi! Glad you liked it! I'm going to be re-writing this story, after some suggestions and thinking, I believe that it is lacking and not up to a standard I like nor in a position which could be expanded upon. So in short, you'll get another story taking place in the same college with the same characters plus more. However, in the series of stories I'm planning, the college setting is just a single chapter, where as the theme of transformation and the gas will be a feature in all parts of the series. Also, I like the principal/secretary idea, already have plans on how to implement it ;)

8/1/21, 4:00 PM
@Neeno I'm glad you liked it, I hope it goes well
7/31/21, 12:28 AM
Great first story! And a werewolf no less...my kind of story. Suggestion: I thought it went too fast and was a broad narration. If you could develop it more, it may well turn into a block buster story. Introduce us to the guys a few days before the exam. How Taylor was dreading the exam, how Rufus bullied Bobbie, how the jocks were glad they didn't have to take the exam and could hang out in the gym instead. Develop some personalities and friendships/adversaries. Then bring it all together as they fight against the gas, succumb and transform. Add a coach Daddy to the invigalators, and off to the races!! Keep writing...you did well.

8/1/21, 3:52 PM
@PupScout Thank you very much for the suggestions! Like I said at the beginning of the story, this was definitely me just testing the waters, getting used to formatting a story on this site and seeing peoples reactions to it. For those reasons I can 100% understand and agree with you wholeheartedly that it's lacking in areas, the characters in the story were made up on the spot to add some diversity into the mix. I now have a much better idea in the direction I'm going with this idea and would like to turn it into a series. For that reason I'm going to plan and re-write this story, making it much larger, adding the much needed character development, and creating a foundation to expand on for Chapter 2. Thank you again for the suggestions, and I'm glad you like it!
8/1/21, 3:43 PM
Super super hot, thanks for posting!