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8/1/21, 4:19 PM
I love the detail of exponential complexity that would take a collective mind to understand. (Dan(2of9of2of2) ejaculated against (1of9of1of2) and continued to make out in perfect harmony, aware that the Standard Form had departed whilst they had been quietly assimilating). Great attention to detail. I'm envious!
Jul 31, 2021
7/31/21, 6:23 PM
My god, that was hot. please do a sequel to this.

8/1/21, 1:13 PM
@Jonanator Glad it got you excited. We'll see about a sequel.

8/1/21, 4:17 PM
@ControlMe Yeah. I know what you intended it to be, but, it was so great. it could turn out to be a great series.
7/30/21, 9:56 PM
I like this one, will we see more? if you accept suggestions, why now show the principal getting dominated by his secretary and the coach becoming the theater teacher's bitch?

8/1/21, 3:58 PM
@darkblade2814 Hi! Glad you liked it! I'm going to be re-writing this story, after some suggestions and thinking, I believe that it is lacking and not up to a standard I like nor in a position which could be expanded upon. So in short, you'll get another story taking place in the same college with the same characters plus more. However, in the series of stories I'm planning, the college setting is just a single chapter, where as the theme of transformation and the gas will be a feature in all parts of the series. Also, I like the principal/secretary idea, already have plans on how to implement it ;)

8/1/21, 4:00 PM
@Neeno I'm glad you liked it, I hope it goes well
7/31/21, 12:28 AM
Great first story! And a werewolf no less...my kind of story. Suggestion: I thought it went too fast and was a broad narration. If you could develop it more, it may well turn into a block buster story. Introduce us to the guys a few days before the exam. How Taylor was dreading the exam, how Rufus bullied Bobbie, how the jocks were glad they didn't have to take the exam and could hang out in the gym instead. Develop some personalities and friendships/adversaries. Then bring it all together as they fight against the gas, succumb and transform. Add a coach Daddy to the invigalators, and off to the races!! Keep writing...you did well.

8/1/21, 3:52 PM
@PupScout Thank you very much for the suggestions! Like I said at the beginning of the story, this was definitely me just testing the waters, getting used to formatting a story on this site and seeing peoples reactions to it. For those reasons I can 100% understand and agree with you wholeheartedly that it's lacking in areas, the characters in the story were made up on the spot to add some diversity into the mix. I now have a much better idea in the direction I'm going with this idea and would like to turn it into a series. For that reason I'm going to plan and re-write this story, making it much larger, adding the much needed character development, and creating a foundation to expand on for Chapter 2. Thank you again for the suggestions, and I'm glad you like it!
8/1/21, 3:43 PM
Super super hot, thanks for posting!
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8/1/21, 2:33 PM
It's so hot how they all seem to know something isn't quite right and should do something to stop it but instead are slowly giving in to becoming enhanced.
Jul 31, 2021
8/1/21, 2:26 PM
excellent. Would be nice to see how he takes over others too
Jul 31, 2021
8/1/21, 2:22 PM
I really like the big sub small top dynamic. Nice story too.
8/1/21, 2:08 PM
Nice, I hope we see more wedgie stuff! Thats something I wish I see more in humiliation stories
8/1/21, 1:20 PM
Dare i say, this has the potential to be your hottest story yet. Hot, sleezy professor getting sluttified and humiliated. Can just imagine how thats going to ripple through every aspect of his life.