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Jul 31, 2021
7/31/21, 2:46 PM
Fuck, that was hot. Really enjoyed the first person perspective! More please!

8/1/21, 1:13 PM
@Ruffcub Thanks. I'm glad it did it for you. Not sure if there will be more yet.
8/1/21, 12:24 PM
Love this chapter! So many hot images and ideas being thrown at the reader in rapid succession.
Anonymous
8/1/21, 10:37 AM
OMG!!! this series is sooo hot!!! the whole scene in the plumbing tube had me dripping along...
8/1/21, 8:27 AM
This is a hot story. you should totally continue it
8/1/21, 7:31 AM
this story just gets better and better with each chapter
8/1/21, 7:16 AM
genuinely hot af ;)
8/1/21, 7:02 AM
Who knows what, or who, they will find if they were to continue investigating the planet. A must read, for sure.
7/27/21, 4:14 AM
The proof that I've been terribly busy these days is that until now I couldn't read well this new story you uploaded. Good as usual, buddy. I like that Charlie seem to be negligent and careless... would be bad from my side to assume he's a bit slow minded? well, he gave me that impression, and I think that's a good choice for a main character. We typically have main characters with average to high intelligence behind the mind control, and it's good to have a careless simple guy in charge to give a different flavor.

Oddballs
7/31/21, 1:25 AM
@Plymouth58 In all honesty, that's probably me myself getting through, because I have very little semblance of what highly intellectual professors such as Dover actually say in a university course lmao XD I'd be illustrating the example of the form of a professor with a speech bubble that said ("Blah blah blah, educated noise. Furthermore, blah blah fancy adjective, blah blah blah complicated Latin quote, blah blah") I'm basically winging this exactly how I've been winging Seducing A Cowboy; fetishizing a scene and having very little clue about going about this! Heheheheeeeeeee~!

8/1/21, 5:36 AM
@Oddballs Ohhh! so the merit is double for you then, buddy! 'Seducing A Cowboy' gives me the impression that you know many things about the life in a ranch or about cowboys, because it have many details that really immerse me into that world. Man, you're truly talented!

Oddballs
8/1/21, 5:45 AM
@Plymouth58 Dude. Not. At. All. I'm such a dunce when it comes to history or even research, when writing Seducing A Cowboy, I am solely operating on the things I see from Back To The Future 3, Blazing Saddles, watching my sister play Red Dead Redemption 2, and an episode of Adam Ruins Everything about the Old West. I almost want to say I'm pulling all of it out of my ass! I'm FAR from being any kind of expert about the themes I currently write, I'm just horning up specific ideas and people and having to ignore a boner on my way to work X3

8/1/21, 6:21 AM
@Oddballs Oh, man, then you're the living proof that that aphorism of "fake it till you make it" really can bring good results! Ha, ha, ha! By the way, I just finished chapter 2 of this new series, and I must say now I have to ignore my boner on my way to work too! XD it's exquisitely horny, buddy.

Oddballs
8/1/21, 6:25 AM
@Plymouth58 Awww, would've liked a comment of what you thought annotation-wise like you do with your other comments. But that's just me being needy and greedy for attention X3 I'm glad you liked it though and I hope you continue to enjoy it, I am looking forward to possibly elaborating it further!
8/1/21, 4:27 AM
Keep up the good work. Great chapter
Nutiper
8/1/21, 3:55 AM
Oooh, an intriguing third chapter full of significant oddities and missing pieces... Such as: what *did* happen last night that Brad can't remember? And where is Vitaly in all this? The things that deliberately *aren't* present are at least as interesting a mystery as what *is* present... I also liked the way Collin keeps framing his "seduction" of Brad as "I can't wait to top him!" even though everything Collin actually does (setting Brad to be an ultra-top, then trying to get Brad's attention by waving his ass around, and then enthusiastically blowing him and riding him — *multiple* times, if you include the next morning aka the start of Chapter 2) is at a disconnect with Collin's conception of himself as mostly a top. Collin talks about planning to turn Brad into a bottom at the first chance he gets... but instead spends all his chances on making Brad even more of a top while enthusiastically benefiting via his mouth and ass. Collin's disconnect between his thoughts and actions is presented in such an *oblivious* way that it makes me suspect a certain app is at play here, too... I'm definitely excited to see what you come up with for Chapter Four (and the possible epilogue) — I really like the way you're spinning this story! Definitely looking forward to a possible answer to the mysteries (though I could see the answer itself opening up even *more* mysteries...), and I'm just looking forward to more of this story in general!