Recent Comments

7/31/21, 12:28 AM
Great first story! And a werewolf no less...my kind of story. Suggestion: I thought it went too fast and was a broad narration. If you could develop it more, it may well turn into a block buster story. Introduce us to the guys a few days before the exam. How Taylor was dreading the exam, how Rufus bullied Bobbie, how the jocks were glad they didn't have to take the exam and could hang out in the gym instead. Develop some personalities and friendships/adversaries. Then bring it all together as they fight against the gas, succumb and transform. Add a coach Daddy to the invigalators, and off to the races!! Keep writing...you did well.

8/1/21, 3:52 PM
@PupScout Thank you very much for the suggestions! Like I said at the beginning of the story, this was definitely me just testing the waters, getting used to formatting a story on this site and seeing peoples reactions to it. For those reasons I can 100% understand and agree with you wholeheartedly that it's lacking in areas, the characters in the story were made up on the spot to add some diversity into the mix. I now have a much better idea in the direction I'm going with this idea and would like to turn it into a series. For that reason I'm going to plan and re-write this story, making it much larger, adding the much needed character development, and creating a foundation to expand on for Chapter 2. Thank you again for the suggestions, and I'm glad you like it!
8/1/21, 3:43 PM
Super super hot, thanks for posting!
Anonymous
8/1/21, 2:33 PM
It's so hot how they all seem to know something isn't quite right and should do something to stop it but instead are slowly giving in to becoming enhanced.
Jul 31, 2021
8/1/21, 2:26 PM
excellent. Would be nice to see how he takes over others too
Jul 31, 2021
8/1/21, 2:22 PM
I really like the big sub small top dynamic. Nice story too.
8/1/21, 2:08 PM
Nice, I hope we see more wedgie stuff! Thats something I wish I see more in humiliation stories
8/1/21, 1:20 PM
Dare i say, this has the potential to be your hottest story yet. Hot, sleezy professor getting sluttified and humiliated. Can just imagine how thats going to ripple through every aspect of his life.
Jul 31, 2021
Anonymous
8/1/21, 4:32 AM
great intro any other parts coming?

8/1/21, 1:15 PM
I hadn't planned on it. This was intended to just be a one-off for someone looking for a quick jerk off session. But, some ideas have begun to stir around after seeing the positive response. We'll see.
Jul 31, 2021
7/31/21, 2:46 PM
Fuck, that was hot. Really enjoyed the first person perspective! More please!

8/1/21, 1:13 PM
@Ruffcub Thanks. I'm glad it did it for you. Not sure if there will be more yet.
8/1/21, 12:24 PM
Love this chapter! So many hot images and ideas being thrown at the reader in rapid succession.