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Jul 29, 2021
7/29/21, 4:13 PM
Definitely needs a sequel where you manage to recruit someone to join the bin crew!
7/29/21, 3:53 PM
Keep going! The descriptions of the changes are great!
7/29/21, 2:38 PM
I enjoyed it but there needs to be better paragraph spacing to make it easier to read. Also I was hoping for a description of the Coach transforming into a hottie.
7/29/21, 1:31 PM
Thank you for writing a hot new work. I like the idea of the Dan's constantly reinventing themselves with every new memeber and version. Can't wait to see where this goes
7/29/21, 1:08 PM
I'm a huge fan of reality change, and loving this story so far. The "editing the textbook" is a great vehicle for the change. Can't wait to read the next installment. Thanks... LLOYD
7/29/21, 8:38 AM
Very hot, especially with the Captain's sudden decision not to inform the doctor about what's happening. But I'm a little confused about the timeline. Jason's entry is dated Day 16, and it's describing things that happened "today," but you already described some of that (Martin's contamination) in the Day 13 log.

Anonymous
7/29/21, 11:56 AM
@Hypnothrill....sigh, that's my fault for collating the collaboration badly. I've made the change for continuity. Thanks as always for your eagle eye!
Jul 29, 2021
7/29/21, 9:42 AM
I always enjoy a good workie transformation. Shame it was so short but maybe you could recruit a friend!
7/29/21, 9:29 AM
hi hypnothrill thanks for comments... expect a few nods to other peoples stories 'in passing' chapters 2 and 3 mostly done.
Ben
7/29/21, 9:20 AM
Loved this! The details really painted the picture in my mind! <3
7/29/21, 8:51 AM
Yes, a new Topaz story! With a lot of his classic tropes! (Great to see the personality.exe file from "Various Techniques" again). Looking forward to seeing how this progresses. My one suggestion is that I hope in subsequent chapters we get more detailed characterization of the various men who get assimilated into the Dan hive.