Recent Comments

7/29/21, 1:08 PM
I'm a huge fan of reality change, and loving this story so far. The "editing the textbook" is a great vehicle for the change. Can't wait to read the next installment. Thanks... LLOYD
7/29/21, 8:38 AM
Very hot, especially with the Captain's sudden decision not to inform the doctor about what's happening. But I'm a little confused about the timeline. Jason's entry is dated Day 16, and it's describing things that happened "today," but you already described some of that (Martin's contamination) in the Day 13 log.

Anonymous
7/29/21, 11:56 AM
@Hypnothrill....sigh, that's my fault for collating the collaboration badly. I've made the change for continuity. Thanks as always for your eagle eye!
Jul 29, 2021
7/29/21, 9:42 AM
I always enjoy a good workie transformation. Shame it was so short but maybe you could recruit a friend!
7/29/21, 9:29 AM
hi hypnothrill thanks for comments... expect a few nods to other peoples stories 'in passing' chapters 2 and 3 mostly done.
Ben
7/29/21, 9:20 AM
Loved this! The details really painted the picture in my mind! <3
7/29/21, 8:51 AM
Yes, a new Topaz story! With a lot of his classic tropes! (Great to see the personality.exe file from "Various Techniques" again). Looking forward to seeing how this progresses. My one suggestion is that I hope in subsequent chapters we get more detailed characterization of the various men who get assimilated into the Dan hive.
7/29/21, 6:58 AM
Hottttttt
7/29/21, 6:41 AM
🔥🔥🔥
7/29/21, 2:09 AM
Will we see part 3 soon?

7/29/21, 3:46 AM
Hopefully, I was on Vacay last week, and before that I was having an issue where any new additions to the chapter were not saving so all my work was erased. I do plan to have a new chapter out soon. @darkblade2814

7/29/21, 5:16 AM
@ArdanWolfe I see, I hope you enjoyed your vacation and I hope your computer is working now
rwriter51
7/29/21, 4:38 AM
These boys a awesome together. At a couple of points I thought tio Hector was going to start rimming Julio or maybe fuck him while Julio was doing Pedro. We can always fantasize, right? Your story is really well-written, and certainly gets the juices flowing.