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7/28/21, 8:02 PM
Things are heating up already, the father is already infected
7/28/21, 1:01 PM
Love this chapter. Some fun changes so far. I like the development of Marc getting caught up in all the changes. Can't wait to see what happens next.

7/28/21, 7:28 PM
Thanks! @Cadek
7/28/21, 7:10 PM
Thanks for the tip! (ha). I'm miserable with military matters. I'll change it to Captain. Much gratitude for your expertise.
Nutiper
7/28/21, 7:00 PM
wow so jot.......

7/28/21, 7:02 PM
@Nutiper No, *you* so jot :D
7/28/21, 6:54 PM
It's the start of the story so there's no much to comment on for that; rankwise, there's a problem. A Corporal is the next step up from a Private in military rank; Lance would most likely be either a Captain if he's still going on mission or a Colonel. A captain is the highest rank you can achieve and still be out on missions; if you go with Captain it would put Lance in his late 40s or early 50s while a Colonel is much higher up and would put Lance somewhere in his 60s and bring him out from behind a desk to go on a mission. I leave the choice to you, but that's a correction you'll need to make.
7/28/21, 5:09 PM
Me encanta 😍 Quiero mas! 🙌🏻
Jul 27, 2021
7/28/21, 3:50 PM
What a great history u have here, seems like u know the character quite well since I can be alive rocket action ma proper to his character. It was so good, that I wanted to more by the time I reached the end, hope u write more Rocket stories in the future!
Doug
7/28/21, 1:44 PM
How about a Diamond tier and then a Platinum tier?
7/28/21, 12:08 PM
Well, that was a good start, let see how it goes
2/6/21, 10:27 PM
It sounds like the end of the this series. I do hope to hear about more, but I'm glad to have taken this journey and will gladly do so again!

7/28/21, 9:59 AM
@djinnie LOVED it amazing in every way, just a little upkeep, wasnt the dads orientation gay? im wondering if it was something i missed or a mistake