Recent Comments

7/27/21, 9:20 PM
Very true! At least in fictional writing.
7/27/21, 12:27 AM
I hope they get it good! They deserve it! Honestly, though, I don't see how Ben could ever trust any of them again even if they appeared in the show. It will be a very interesting show. They did this to him right before his wedding? Might be simpler, and less amusing, to just cut them out of his life.

7/27/21, 9:19 PM
@Cutlerfan IRL I agree, but where's the fun in that! Payback is the way better option.
7/26/21, 11:36 PM
I'm thrilled to see you pick up with this story. If you need inspiration and/or are taking requests, I'd love to see the somehow locked into the glory holes and then edged for a while until they're begging for gay guys to get them off. On camera, naturally.

7/27/21, 9:18 PM
@Evelded Oh you and I have such similar mindsets ;)
7/27/21, 3:32 AM
So the many scenes of this chapter were pretty amazing. I did not super enjoy the very end (how did the system not recognize swallowing as part of a blow job, lol) but beyond that the chapter was super sexy. I mean gay guys not blowing each other does take some fun out of gay relationships but whatever, lol. As a note, we never got to read the change made at the end of last night, not words wise. That is kind of surprising as I figured we would at least get to see what he wrote at some point. Fun stuff though it seems to have taken a life of its own, to the point I don't think either would recognize themselves anymore.

7/27/21, 8:56 PM
Thanks! The end is supposed to set up more fun for the next chapter since it gives Gabe ideas. Sam will read Gabe's last change at some point, he just had bigger priorities this chapter. @Heru Kane
Anonymous
7/27/21, 3:31 AM
Another amazing chapter! I absolutely love Sam's slow spiral of unwittingly turning himself into a slutty bottom.

7/27/21, 8:53 PM
Thanks! @
7/27/21, 4:59 AM
This story is so fucking hot! It's like every straight boy fantasy all rolled into one. I love that you're keeping him straight and redefining what it means to be straight (what's a bro job between friends?) I cannot wait to see what you come up with next. I just know the eventual scene with him and Mark is gonna be off the charts hot. 5 stars and endless accolades from me to you (and @Nutiper and @MonsterMash62)!

7/27/21, 8:53 PM
Oh, thanks! Pushing the boundaries of "straight" and poking fun at fragile heterosexual egos is definitely a big part of the story. @Freckleman64
7/27/21, 7:36 AM
This has been such a hot story. I keep going back to it. I like the power dynamic between Sam and Gabe, and how their friendship has shifted between the edits. It really makes for an engaging plot. Sam is infuriating, though, and I love it. If he made smarter edits, I'm not certain this would be as entertaining. I'm really hoping to see Sam get huge as well... Though if Sam is the straightest guy on campus... I suppose if the rest of the guys are gay, it won't take much to shift him over as well.

7/27/21, 8:52 PM
Thanks! Wishes gone wrong because of poor wording is one of my favorite tropes, so I'm having fun writing changes that have unexpected (but fun) consequences. @RedPed
7/27/21, 12:06 PM
I have loved every single syllable of this story. I cannot wait to read more about Sam's slow transformation into a paragon of heterosexuality. At this rate, Sam might wind up the only straight guy left on campus!

7/27/21, 8:50 PM
Thanks! He's definitely going to be in demand as one of the few people on campus still willing to give blowjobs. @Demivierge
7/27/21, 6:32 PM
It's an interesting series. Sam seems guaranteed to come out the loser in one respect. he keeps getting in very sexy situations but he can't really enjoy them because he's straight. They wrote in the book that Sam can't be turned gay, I think, so unless that entry was in pencil Sam is doomed to be constantly horny but refusing full on gay sex. I don't like the negative tone in Gabe's behavior either. I hope they can be a happy couple by the end and both versatile to be fair. I can't see Sam and Marc as a couple. Sam and Gabe would be an awesome pair assuming they were equals. I do wish gay guys could still do bjs though.

7/27/21, 8:49 PM
Thanks for reading! A big part of the story is Sam making changes to the definition of "straight" so he can still do all the fun sex stuff guys he wants without it seeming "gay" (which, obviously it is, but not in the reality that Sam and Gabe are in). @Cutlerfan
Jul 27, 2021
7/27/21, 5:26 PM
I thought it was a bit too fast-paced at the beginning; we get only a sentence describing Lucas, then all of a sudden he's transforming (but his transformation doesn't mean much because we got such a brief glimpse of who he was before). But Steve's transformation into Stevie was really well done.

7/27/21, 5:48 PM
@Hypnothrill I agree with this assessment! I should have taken some more time to set up the students in their regular modes. Maybe I'll write a sequel from a different perspective to expand upon that.

7/27/21, 6:25 PM
@Wakka that would be fun