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7/27/21, 12:06 PM
I have loved every single syllable of this story. I cannot wait to read more about Sam's slow transformation into a paragon of heterosexuality. At this rate, Sam might wind up the only straight guy left on campus!

7/27/21, 8:50 PM
Thanks! He's definitely going to be in demand as one of the few people on campus still willing to give blowjobs. @Demivierge
7/27/21, 6:32 PM
It's an interesting series. Sam seems guaranteed to come out the loser in one respect. he keeps getting in very sexy situations but he can't really enjoy them because he's straight. They wrote in the book that Sam can't be turned gay, I think, so unless that entry was in pencil Sam is doomed to be constantly horny but refusing full on gay sex. I don't like the negative tone in Gabe's behavior either. I hope they can be a happy couple by the end and both versatile to be fair. I can't see Sam and Marc as a couple. Sam and Gabe would be an awesome pair assuming they were equals. I do wish gay guys could still do bjs though.

7/27/21, 8:49 PM
Thanks for reading! A big part of the story is Sam making changes to the definition of "straight" so he can still do all the fun sex stuff guys he wants without it seeming "gay" (which, obviously it is, but not in the reality that Sam and Gabe are in). @Cutlerfan
Jul 27, 2021
7/27/21, 5:26 PM
I thought it was a bit too fast-paced at the beginning; we get only a sentence describing Lucas, then all of a sudden he's transforming (but his transformation doesn't mean much because we got such a brief glimpse of who he was before). But Steve's transformation into Stevie was really well done.

7/27/21, 5:48 PM
@Hypnothrill I agree with this assessment! I should have taken some more time to set up the students in their regular modes. Maybe I'll write a sequel from a different perspective to expand upon that.

7/27/21, 6:25 PM
@Wakka that would be fun
7/27/21, 4:40 PM
I'll consider making some edits since the locker room scene seems to be getting misread. It's supposed to read as two horny dudes (who have been checking each other out all morning) both using the book to make it okay to fool around -- Gabe sees Sam ogling him, so he makes public sex normal, then Sam uses the book to make straight guys giving blowjobs normal. Like MonsterMash62 said, they're both just kind of dumbasses when it comes to making changes. Gabe isn't malicious, he's just horny and picking up on clues that there's a mutual interest in experimenting.

SC Walker
7/27/21, 5:24 PM
@bluesuedewho Right, that's what I figured was your intention. But maybe since Gabe frames it as "you owe me" and then how rude/dismissive he is after he cums, it feels more coercive. I'm glad though that gabe is still intended to be a nice guy.

7/27/21, 5:59 PM
@SC Walker I read it as how straight bros interact. Gabe framing it that way totally fits with his bro persona, especially after it’s even more dominant. He’s sort of joking, sort of not. And he pushes on Sam a little, but he’s still a little playful with it.
Jul 27, 2021
7/27/21, 3:29 PM
I hope to see a part two someday

7/27/21, 5:51 PM
@darkblade2814 Thanks, I'm thinking about it!
Jul 27, 2021
7/27/21, 4:09 PM
Oh, so good, especially Stevie's dumbing down, but I wish it would had been a bit longer. Just like Professor Dong, brah!

7/27/21, 5:50 PM
@Plymouth58 A more drawn out transformation would have made it hotter for sure. Yeah, the appeal here is that Steve is basically "edging" into his new jock identity, some more buildup would have been good. Thanks for the feedback!
Somnus
7/27/21, 4:55 PM
It's so rare to find fart based stories on here, and rarer still to find one that is well written. I'm glad you've proven the potential for these kinds of stories. I look forward to reading more and exploring what else has been happening to the men at the gym.
SC Walker
7/27/21, 3:29 PM
The sex parts of this story are some of the best I've ever read. It ticks all my boxes for sure - especially the lubed up holes. Though, I gotta agree with the other commentator about Gabe's recent developments. I like it when smaller guys top bigger guys, but that's a personal preference. But, I also felt like it was very important to the story Gabe and Sam's bond of friendship had mutual respect. For example, I liked seeing Gabe be a wingman for Sam. It was nice to illustrate their supportive friendship in that way. Gabe seems to be falling into that trap of thinking "dominant" is the same thing as "being a jerk". I understand that may be the intention, but I can't help but feel like it wasn't. After all, you still want your readers to root for Gabe... It would be different if it was framed like Gabe nudging Sam to experiment more as a means of helping him, freeing him from discomfort. I liked how apologetic Gabe was last chapter when Sam was inadvertantly affected by his impulsive edit. Yet this chapter he doesn't continue any of that care or concern. I'm not trying to dictate your story to you or make demands, I just think maybe your intentions didn't come through and maybe the text could be misinterpreted. As a writer, sometimes people misunderstand my stories as well - and I try to clarify and fix it to reduce confusion. Anyways overall a fantastic, hot story!
7/27/21, 8:35 AM
What a cool world you've created! This was hot. Can't wait

7/27/21, 2:44 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk Thank you so much! definitely standing on the shoulders of giants there with a bit of our own twist! Really appreciate the encouragement!
7/27/21, 12:19 PM
Such incredible world-building! The story is equally sinister and hot. Great writing!

7/27/21, 2:43 PM
@Hypnoguy67 thank you so much! I do seem to lean more towards sinister in my writing than sweet these days ^^ I look forward to sharing more!