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Jul 26, 2021
7/27/21, 2:35 AM
I'll echo the sentiment that farts have never turned me on before, but I enjoyed your writing of them
Jul 24, 2021
Anonymous
7/27/21, 1:55 AM
Love it!
Jul 26, 2021
7/26/21, 11:34 PM
I've never been turned on by flatulence before this; It takes a great story idea to get me going. It's a great prelude. I hope that the next installments will follow through with the transformation elements.
Jul 26, 2021
7/26/21, 6:05 PM
did you delete Luke's Little Brother? that was a super hot chapter and I was always looking forward to when his little bro would fuck that fat ass and make it his property.
SC Walker
7/26/21, 6:07 PM
@Fattenupmen I had to delete it due to Patreon's stupid rules. I'm going to write a replacement chapter.
7/26/21, 6:17 PM
Looking forward to it and Luke's Brotherly Bonding. THAT was my favorite. Keep up the great work! @SC Walker
SC Walker
7/26/21, 10:30 PM
@Fattenupmen Incest is against Patreon's rules so it won't be his brother anymore.
Jul 26, 2021
7/26/21, 9:22 PM
Once I got past the capitalization and apostrophe errors, I really loved this story. I thought you had a very vivid way of describing farts and assholes, and I loved the twist with the security guards. I'd love to see you expand on this (but just maybe do a bit more copy editing next time!)
Jan 31, 2021
7/26/21, 9:08 PM
this was one great story Sir. Enjoyed it from beginning to end! Excellent work!
Jul 15, 2021
7/26/21, 5:52 PM
I've just read all your stories to date, and while I adore almost everything about them I do wish the penis shrinking/SPH were less prominent.
7/26/21, 7:10 PM
Glad you’re enjoying the stories so far (and to come)! I didn’t tag any of those stories with penis-shrinking/SPH because usually those tags are for stories where it’s a major theme. I thought tagging my stories that way might disappoint readers who are looking for those things, since it only appears briefly in passing, and it would feel misleading to people searching specifically for stories about that theme.@Drockan
Jul 14, 2020
7/26/21, 5:35 PM
Man. What a slam dunk. Hot sex, a fun twist on reprogramming, a believable pre-sex dynamic to make it all really feel like Dave's changing him. Thanks for posting.
Jul 7, 2021
7/26/21, 5:25 PM
I want to retract what I said previously. I went back and re-read the previous two chapters and realize I have made a mistake. Coming off the previous chapters I and some of the other readers had a false impression that Max was actually pretty nice. I think that came from scenes like when he took Lucas to the park for some fresh air. Upon re-reading the previous parts I realized that Max has been extremely predatory the entire time. I think that the hot sex kind of distracted me to some of what was going on. For instance after that walk in the park Max physically forced Lucas's head into his armpit to dope him up on his pheromones and make him compliant. (It may have seemed like going to the park was for Lucas's benefit but really it was more like he was walking a dog for exercise.) There are many parts of the story where Lucas literally thinks that he wants to break free but he's physically been overpowered by Max and soon after, the drugging affect of the pheromones kicks in and he becomes unresisting. Earlier, before Lucas even understands what it will do, Max is shoving his spit down Lucas's throat to trigger it to awaken and swallow his entire horse cock. Similarly he activates Lucas's ass without asking if it's okay to do that. Once Max has lit upon Lucas, he has already decided that he is going to be his. This story isn't really so much about domination, it's about Max completely stripping Lucas of free will and humanity. The characterization is actually very, very consistent, it's just that once he has progressed to a certain point, Max no longer feels like he has to hide from Lucas exactly how much he is owned and drops the facade. The thing about this is that the reader is so in touch with Lucas's mind that even though Lucas is literally being physically altered and enslaved to Max in earlier chapters, it feels so good the true ramifications don't really hit home. Then when Max shows that actually Lucas is in far too deep, it's a shock to Lucas but it's *also* a shock to the reader. I think that's why a bunch of us kind of balked. We were enjoying the fantasy up to that point but then we realized we were far over the line that we thought we were. I really don't say this lightly but I think this is the hottest story on the site and I'm actually really excited to see what ends up happening, whether Lucas becomes a horny near mindless baby maker, or if there is some twist we haven't seen. That my expectations have been properly realigned I think I can enjoy the very dark ride more smoothly.
Jul 23, 2021
7/24/21, 5:06 AM
My thoughts on this story have been mixed for reasons I won't get into here--it's an AMAZING story, don't get me wrong! Incredible writing and world-building. I do sense, however, that the temptation of absolute power is beginning to corrupt Gabe absolutely...what will happen? :O
Nutiper
7/24/21, 7:07 AM
@Feed Your Head Oh, I didn't read it as the temptation for absolute power — I just read it as Gabe being pissed that Sam keeps disparaging Gabe for not being "stereotypically" top enough! I mean, Sam has brought it up in pretty much every single chapter, usually whenever he wants to get on Gabe's nerves. So I guess Gabe just finally had enough and decided to do something about it. Knowing Gabe, though, it's probably some careful thought-out global change — I mean, this is the guy who checked out a copy of *Gray's Anatomy* before making larger changes, just to be careful... (Which is one reason I love the bubble butt changes, haha. It's fun to see what happened when Gabe had to rapidly come up with a change mid-fuck that would let him keep going! The unexpected ripple effects of the otherwise-careful Gabe's one spontaneous change have been *really* fun to see, for me.)
7/24/21, 5:13 PM
@Nutiper Definitely a valid reading! However, spending a lot of time on this website has shown me that 99 times out of 100, those who can warp reality are inevitably caught up in a power trip (I seem to recall a certain Washington D.C. sorcerer who warped the gay population into having bulging butts?) ;p And I agree: it's definitely fun to see the changes happening! But the fact that the usually-cautious and careful Gabe made a thoughtless change because of horniness AND deliberately pulled a nasty trick with the book doesn't exactly fill me with confidence. :p We'll see what happens!
Nutiper
7/24/21, 6:10 PM
@Feed Your Head Hahaha that is true about most of the stories on the site! But Wes in my story was never a terribly nice guy, really — I feel like the big difference here is that Sam and Gabe are so visibly friends. Gabe even felt mortified and offered to undo the butt change the *instant* he realized it affected Sam. I feel like they both enjoy pranking each other, and trying to one-up each other competitively... but I'm not getting the sense that either one would do something to deliberately screw over the other. It feels like they really do have each other's backs... But messing with each other in a playful (and increasingly horny and homoerotic) way is still on the table! (At least, that's my reading, so far.)
7/24/21, 7:55 PM
@Nutiper That's definitely true! And in reading over your comment, I realize that this story is hitting a blind spot for me: namely, how cis jock bros interact with each other. Granted, Gabe is gay, but he's also a total jock, and the interactions between male jocks has never been something I really learned how to do. I'm a cis gay theatre/arts nerd, so even the straight guys in my circle tend to be more open with feelings and emotional. The whole "just messing with you!" thing is the province of the Bro! :p That's not something I see a lot (and it's sadly not a dynamic we get a lot in fiction either--gay/straight friendships that AREN'T about one-sided crushes). I am just glad the story has twists and turns ahead! Although the fact that you're contributing makes me suspect you might be right. :p
Nutiper
7/25/21, 6:16 AM
@Feed Your Head Haha I will neither confirm nor deny anything about contributing to in-progress chapters... But ooh, that's actually a really interesting point, and I think you've hit the nail on the head. This is *definitely* a bro-friendship story, you're right, and it has that whole competitive, show-off-y, "just messing with you bro!" vibe that is such a staple of those friendships. Like, trying to one-up each other and prank each other in this friendly rivalry... while also devoted to having each other's backs. I'm also a cis gay dude who is more artsy than not, but for whatever reason the college I went to had lots of bros and bro-adjacent guys, haha, and I was friends with some of them so I realize that dynamic is familiar to me.
7/25/21, 1:36 PM
I'm another arts-inclined cis gay guy without much IRL experience with the kind of jocky college bros Gabe and Sam are supposed to be, but I've always had a soft spot for that dynamic in fiction -- then I got over it, and *then* I played a dating simulator called Dream Daddy and kind of fell for it again! @Feed Your Head @Nutiper
Nutiper
7/25/21, 5:55 PM
@bluesuedewho Aw, Dream Daddy!! Hahaha I think I have my suspicions about *which* dream daddy inspired you to return to the jocky bro type... (To be honest, he kinda inspired me too...)
7/25/21, 6:04 PM
In hindsight, probably also subconsciously the reason I like stereotype-breaking Asian jock characters! @Nutiper
7/26/21, 2:54 AM
@bluesuedewho @Nutiper Ha ha, I've seen the ads, but I've never played! :p Also, I want to talk about the weird crossover in my college class. We had a theatre bro! He was a jock and played baseball in high school, then took acting classes and started loving it. So he was a theatre jock hybrid, and it was BIZARRE. :p When we roomed together in senior year, we'd have rehearsals and then go back to our apartment; I'd write papers and he'd play Flip Cup with his equally hot bro friends. Good times! :p
Nutiper
7/26/21, 4:51 PM
@Feed Your Head In a GSS story that theater bro would definitely be the result of someone having made an edit to themselves, haha... Thankfully reality is a lot more nuanced and complex!