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The_Supernatural_D
7/27/21, 3:35 AM
I love a story with a good happy ending.
7/27/21, 3:08 AM
Rereading the full story again, is even hotter to see the slow and delicious transformation of everybody, but especially Cody's. On the first chapters he had an air of confidence and a manly attitude that he progressively lose. Not that he's becoming a sissy, but he's certainly becoming less manlier, less assertive and I love that. A line that blew my mind is when Mr. Gordie says "Walkin ‘round here without your daddy to hold your hand". Man, what a way to demasculinize him! the rest of the dialogue and how Cody is reduced first to a fearful wimp, and later to a horny slut is pure gold. The cherry on top of the cake is Nate taking part on the debasement of his Boss' son, there's so much to enjoy here. Something that caught my attention powerfully was the line of "the sheriff is wearing NOTHING but some briefs". Man, that left me with so many questions and possibilities. I can't get tired of this story nor get enough of it!!!
7/27/21, 2:55 AM
I really liked the story, however, one thing I'd say is you need to lookup the right way to do your line breaks. There should be a paragraph or line break each time the person speaking changes. It makes it a lot more readable. Anyway, thanks for the story.
7/27/21, 2:44 AM
So I find this story surprisingly very sexy. So yeah, nice start.
7/27/21, 2:39 AM
i love this story, i was kind of worried that you wouldn't continue it
7/27/21, 2:35 AM
I'll echo the sentiment that farts have never turned me on before, but I enjoyed your writing of them
Anonymous
7/27/21, 1:55 AM
Love it!
7/26/21, 11:34 PM
I've never been turned on by flatulence before this; It takes a great story idea to get me going. It's a great prelude. I hope that the next installments will follow through with the transformation elements.
7/26/21, 6:05 PM
did you delete Luke's Little Brother? that was a super hot chapter and I was always looking forward to when his little bro would fuck that fat ass and make it his property.

SC Walker
7/26/21, 6:07 PM
@Fattenupmen I had to delete it due to Patreon's stupid rules. I'm going to write a replacement chapter.

7/26/21, 6:17 PM
Looking forward to it and Luke's Brotherly Bonding. THAT was my favorite. Keep up the great work! @SC Walker

SC Walker
7/26/21, 10:30 PM
@Fattenupmen Incest is against Patreon's rules so it won't be his brother anymore.
7/26/21, 9:22 PM
Once I got past the capitalization and apostrophe errors, I really loved this story. I thought you had a very vivid way of describing farts and assholes, and I loved the twist with the security guards. I'd love to see you expand on this (but just maybe do a bit more copy editing next time!)