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7/24/21, 5:06 AM
My thoughts on this story have been mixed for reasons I won't get into here--it's an AMAZING story, don't get me wrong! Incredible writing and world-building. I do sense, however, that the temptation of absolute power is beginning to corrupt Gabe absolutely...what will happen? :O

Nutiper
7/24/21, 7:07 AM
@Feed Your Head Oh, I didn't read it as the temptation for absolute power — I just read it as Gabe being pissed that Sam keeps disparaging Gabe for not being "stereotypically" top enough! I mean, Sam has brought it up in pretty much every single chapter, usually whenever he wants to get on Gabe's nerves. So I guess Gabe just finally had enough and decided to do something about it. Knowing Gabe, though, it's probably some careful thought-out global change — I mean, this is the guy who checked out a copy of *Gray's Anatomy* before making larger changes, just to be careful... (Which is one reason I love the bubble butt changes, haha. It's fun to see what happened when Gabe had to rapidly come up with a change mid-fuck that would let him keep going! The unexpected ripple effects of the otherwise-careful Gabe's one spontaneous change have been *really* fun to see, for me.)

7/24/21, 5:13 PM
@Nutiper Definitely a valid reading! However, spending a lot of time on this website has shown me that 99 times out of 100, those who can warp reality are inevitably caught up in a power trip (I seem to recall a certain Washington D.C. sorcerer who warped the gay population into having bulging butts?) ;p And I agree: it's definitely fun to see the changes happening! But the fact that the usually-cautious and careful Gabe made a thoughtless change because of horniness AND deliberately pulled a nasty trick with the book doesn't exactly fill me with confidence. :p We'll see what happens!

Nutiper
7/24/21, 6:10 PM
@Feed Your Head Hahaha that is true about most of the stories on the site! But Wes in my story was never a terribly nice guy, really — I feel like the big difference here is that Sam and Gabe are so visibly friends. Gabe even felt mortified and offered to undo the butt change the *instant* he realized it affected Sam. I feel like they both enjoy pranking each other, and trying to one-up each other competitively... but I'm not getting the sense that either one would do something to deliberately screw over the other. It feels like they really do have each other's backs... But messing with each other in a playful (and increasingly horny and homoerotic) way is still on the table! (At least, that's my reading, so far.)

7/24/21, 7:55 PM
@Nutiper That's definitely true! And in reading over your comment, I realize that this story is hitting a blind spot for me: namely, how cis jock bros interact with each other. Granted, Gabe is gay, but he's also a total jock, and the interactions between male jocks has never been something I really learned how to do. I'm a cis gay theatre/arts nerd, so even the straight guys in my circle tend to be more open with feelings and emotional. The whole "just messing with you!" thing is the province of the Bro! :p That's not something I see a lot (and it's sadly not a dynamic we get a lot in fiction either--gay/straight friendships that AREN'T about one-sided crushes). I am just glad the story has twists and turns ahead! Although the fact that you're contributing makes me suspect you might be right. :p

Nutiper
7/25/21, 6:16 AM
@Feed Your Head Haha I will neither confirm nor deny anything about contributing to in-progress chapters... But ooh, that's actually a really interesting point, and I think you've hit the nail on the head. This is *definitely* a bro-friendship story, you're right, and it has that whole competitive, show-off-y, "just messing with you bro!" vibe that is such a staple of those friendships. Like, trying to one-up each other and prank each other in this friendly rivalry... while also devoted to having each other's backs. I'm also a cis gay dude who is more artsy than not, but for whatever reason the college I went to had lots of bros and bro-adjacent guys, haha, and I was friends with some of them so I realize that dynamic is familiar to me.

7/25/21, 1:36 PM
I'm another arts-inclined cis gay guy without much IRL experience with the kind of jocky college bros Gabe and Sam are supposed to be, but I've always had a soft spot for that dynamic in fiction -- then I got over it, and *then* I played a dating simulator called Dream Daddy and kind of fell for it again! @Feed Your Head @Nutiper

Nutiper
7/25/21, 5:55 PM
@bluesuedewho Aw, Dream Daddy!! Hahaha I think I have my suspicions about *which* dream daddy inspired you to return to the jocky bro type... (To be honest, he kinda inspired me too...)

7/25/21, 6:04 PM
In hindsight, probably also subconsciously the reason I like stereotype-breaking Asian jock characters! @Nutiper

7/26/21, 2:54 AM
@bluesuedewho @Nutiper Ha ha, I've seen the ads, but I've never played! :p Also, I want to talk about the weird crossover in my college class. We had a theatre bro! He was a jock and played baseball in high school, then took acting classes and started loving it. So he was a theatre jock hybrid, and it was BIZARRE. :p When we roomed together in senior year, we'd have rehearsals and then go back to our apartment; I'd write papers and he'd play Flip Cup with his equally hot bro friends. Good times! :p

Nutiper
7/26/21, 4:51 PM
@Feed Your Head In a GSS story that theater bro would definitely be the result of someone having made an edit to themselves, haha... Thankfully reality is a lot more nuanced and complex!
7/26/21, 2:11 PM
I wanna play the slots

7/26/21, 4:38 PM
@JockPupTraxxx Same here. We need this game in real life.
7/26/21, 10:25 AM
OMG! That's incredible hot, I really love the theme you set for this series. Please keep feeding us readers more!
nobody
7/26/21, 9:47 AM
never got a description of zak which felt off since everyone else did get a paragraph for themselves... other than that and what everyone else said about it feeling a bit rushed towards the end it's pretty good
7/26/21, 6:30 AM
hi, hope your well. I keep reading your two stories. they are the hottest on this site. I'd love to read more , it gives me a chance to get into your mind
7/26/21, 6:26 AM
Great work! we does not get enough dom bottom stories, please keep the story going :)
Leo
7/23/21, 4:00 AM
Thank you so much for giving us another update :) This story is way too good for it to go to waste! I love how the dad is going further into obedience and becoming his son's sexy plaything. However, I think Liam needs to take full advantage that his newly divorced dad is single! Liam should hypnotize him further and get Cyrus to propose and marry him, in order to prove how much he loves his son. Cyrus will act like this is normal and will even take his new fiancé on dates out in public. He will be grateful that a hot stud like Liam took interest in him. I also wanna see the dad become totally mindcontrolled/enslaved and start calling his son master.

7/26/21, 6:19 AM
@Leo I also think the dad being obedience and calling Liam master would be great. I would also like to see the dad helping the brother understand how to serve their master.
7/26/21, 5:57 AM
It's a different world, consent and abuse obviously doesn't coincide with our world's definitions. For instance, in a world without females, where a man's pheromones alert him to whether or not someone is compatible, there would possibly be no rape, and therefore no questions of consent. And seeing as they only met a couple days ago, as they've gotten more comfortable with each other, Max has let his guard down and shown how alpha this Alpha can be. I'm not surprised he got a little rougher and more dominant. If I could self-lube, I'd be in a deep puddle after chapter 3. I look forward to more, especially the logistics of male pregnancy.
7/26/21, 4:15 AM
Love a good drunk on musk story. One thing: waste is garbage, waist is what's above your dick
Anonymous
7/26/21, 12:44 AM
would love to see more of these stories! i thought this was so HOT!