Recent Comments

7/25/21, 9:38 PM
Lusty -- I'm really enjoying this story. The pictures are fun and a nice addition, not distracting. I'm interested in seeing where you end up going with it. Do you mind if I correct one thing? When you don't win, you "lose". When you're not winning, you're "losing". With that in mind, when something is less tight, it's "loose". When you make something less tight, you're "loosening" it. There is no word "loosing". I know it's minor, but it's one of those things that I see a lot and it's easy to fix. You did it in both the first chapter and this second one (though I suspect you copy/pasted it). This is not a complaint about the creativity or the writing, just a grammar thing. It's all love.

7/25/21, 9:45 PM
I'm just blushing hearing that absman read my humble stories. Note taken. I used to think I could get away with bad spelling blaming it on my dyslexia, but over the past 12 years I've realised it is still possible to teach my dyslexic brain to spell. Feelin' the love @absman420
7/25/21, 8:15 PM
This is REALLY hot! It got me going practically from the start. What the games-players end up doing to Jarod is incredibly arousing.

7/25/21, 9:42 PM
Thats a massive compliment man. Glad I could help get you off. any future hopes for the series? I'm currently writing part 3 @FreeThinker
Kyguy
7/25/21, 9:26 PM
i started this story years ago and completely forgot about it. I've not written anything for years, I need to start again.
7/25/21, 8:44 PM
Awesome!
7/25/21, 8:35 PM
This is amazing! Like Nutiper says, it has a real narrative voice, a sense of place, a sense of time. And, plus, a muscled milkman getting -- *milked* by the main character under a mysterious and irresistible influence. Eager for more -- like Coran!
7/25/21, 7:06 PM
I'd love to see this story continued...
7/25/21, 5:18 PM
very hot man. id love to read more!
7/25/21, 4:59 PM
This Story is amazing and the pictures giving my fantasy a nice burst. :Dand
RyMan89
7/22/21, 10:57 PM
Yes please more drug use, make it get really . Also, the swallowing of piss has been HOT!

7/25/21, 4:54 PM
Hi,@RyMan89! thank you very much for telling me what parts you like the most, buddy. Glad to know that, I will put more emphasis on these points!