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7/25/21, 1:33 PM
things are getting intersting, lets see how things will go
7/25/21, 12:24 PM
Wow. I am just loving this. Sam thinking about Gabe’s dick and everything he’s doing to make it normal is super hot. Sam in the shower is super hot. Sam being happy about the changes to his butt and exploring them is super hot. The way Sam and Gabe interact is still pitch perfect, with the whole friend, bro thing being a part of their interactions, even if there’s hints that it could move into bros who have sex. Really well done. I’m blown away by how good you’ve written these characters, while still keeping this story hot and sexy.

7/25/21, 1:28 PM
Thanks! Character dynamics are just as important to me as sex scenes in stories like these. @MonsterMash62
Anonymous
7/25/21, 10:17 AM
Oh man, love to hear what happens to other men who present complications like Jason.
7/25/21, 9:46 AM
This is a great piece of work. I like the way you set the mood and scene. So what's Sam's the next adventure going to be?
7/25/21, 9:16 AM
I love the delivery boy idea, he can meet so many wonderful people.
7/25/21, 8:24 AM
very hot story man.
7/25/21, 8:22 AM
I love how sinister it got at the end. There's a feeling of dread, but also knowing that he'd be sad to lose Sebastian too, that there might be some drawback to escaping. Even just that faint hint about the lengths the Company will go to. Just wonderful.
4/23/21, 2:30 AM
Thanks for replying to my comment. I think that maybe you'll like some of my stories, like Club Voodoo, perhaps. Please leave a comment if you do! https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10000795 BTW, I like your avatar. You can see why by looking at mine!

7/25/21, 7:15 AM
thanks @DikThik I will check out your story
Nutiper
7/24/21, 6:57 AM
Oh, *nice*. This chapter is great! I really am enjoying the reverse-chronological concept — it is *fun* and you are doing a fantastic job of pacing the suspense by telling the story in reverse, and changing the implications of the story the further you go. Kudos, honestly. It was so fun to see how things were a week ago, all while knowing where they'll *eventually* be heading... and to see what circumstances in the current chapter *led* to those changes that we knew were coming. (Poor Collin, making a classic rookie mistake — don't make a guy super-dominant before handing him the reality-changing phone!) I also loved how the neighbor Vitaliy grew more prominent here. There was a suggestion of something *off* about him in the previous chapter, and here we're seeing that, oh yeah, there's *definitely* something more to him... Especially since Collin can't even remember how he found out about the program at all...? Also, this part was clever: > I reach for the phone to look more, but Collin pulls it back. “Stop! No! You can’t touch your own profile. It’ll create an error and— and— I’m not really sure what will happen, but you’re not allowed to.” Really clever for two reasons. First off, it's a *great* concept — they can only change each other, not themselves, and that is a *fun* limitation for this type of story. And secondly... Collin's phrasing suggests that the inability to edit their own profiles isn't an actual limit of the program. It sounds more like someone forbade Collin from doing it, or made him convinced it was impossible... Aka, more hints of what happened earlier, and some great "reverse" foreshadowing of what might *actually* be going on...

Max Lode
7/24/21, 12:36 PM
@Nutiper Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment! You've really hit the nail on the head for what I was trying to achieve, so I'm grateful to know that it's coming through. I think there will be two more chapters to complete the arc and then maybe an epilogue if it feels right.

Nutiper
7/25/21, 5:16 AM
@Max Lode *Mmmm*, I am looking forward to it! This is a really great story, and I'm so excited to read more!
7/25/21, 4:02 AM
finally! a story where its actually a small top, big bottom. loved this, my only complaint is that it ended! please continue with similar stories, hopefully with even younger and shorter guys dominating older muscular daddies, with maybe some ballbusting!