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7/25/21, 9:46 AM
This is a great piece of work. I like the way you set the mood and scene. So what's Sam's the next adventure going to be?
7/25/21, 9:16 AM
I love the delivery boy idea, he can meet so many wonderful people.
7/25/21, 8:24 AM
very hot story man.
7/25/21, 8:22 AM
I love how sinister it got at the end. There's a feeling of dread, but also knowing that he'd be sad to lose Sebastian too, that there might be some drawback to escaping. Even just that faint hint about the lengths the Company will go to. Just wonderful.
4/23/21, 2:30 AM
Thanks for replying to my comment. I think that maybe you'll like some of my stories, like Club Voodoo, perhaps. Please leave a comment if you do! https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10000795 BTW, I like your avatar. You can see why by looking at mine!

7/25/21, 7:15 AM
thanks @DikThik I will check out your story
Nutiper
7/24/21, 6:57 AM
Oh, *nice*. This chapter is great! I really am enjoying the reverse-chronological concept — it is *fun* and you are doing a fantastic job of pacing the suspense by telling the story in reverse, and changing the implications of the story the further you go. Kudos, honestly. It was so fun to see how things were a week ago, all while knowing where they'll *eventually* be heading... and to see what circumstances in the current chapter *led* to those changes that we knew were coming. (Poor Collin, making a classic rookie mistake — don't make a guy super-dominant before handing him the reality-changing phone!) I also loved how the neighbor Vitaliy grew more prominent here. There was a suggestion of something *off* about him in the previous chapter, and here we're seeing that, oh yeah, there's *definitely* something more to him... Especially since Collin can't even remember how he found out about the program at all...? Also, this part was clever: > I reach for the phone to look more, but Collin pulls it back. “Stop! No! You can’t touch your own profile. It’ll create an error and— and— I’m not really sure what will happen, but you’re not allowed to.” Really clever for two reasons. First off, it's a *great* concept — they can only change each other, not themselves, and that is a *fun* limitation for this type of story. And secondly... Collin's phrasing suggests that the inability to edit their own profiles isn't an actual limit of the program. It sounds more like someone forbade Collin from doing it, or made him convinced it was impossible... Aka, more hints of what happened earlier, and some great "reverse" foreshadowing of what might *actually* be going on...

Max Lode
7/24/21, 12:36 PM
@Nutiper Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment! You've really hit the nail on the head for what I was trying to achieve, so I'm grateful to know that it's coming through. I think there will be two more chapters to complete the arc and then maybe an epilogue if it feels right.

Nutiper
7/25/21, 5:16 AM
@Max Lode *Mmmm*, I am looking forward to it! This is a really great story, and I'm so excited to read more!
7/25/21, 4:02 AM
finally! a story where its actually a small top, big bottom. loved this, my only complaint is that it ended! please continue with similar stories, hopefully with even younger and shorter guys dominating older muscular daddies, with maybe some ballbusting!
SC Walker
7/24/21, 11:27 PM
This story checks ALL my boxes, and I like that there are subtle shifts of character development. Honestly I'm jealous at how creative and well written this is. If you ever want to chat/exchange ideas I would be happy to help. Like seriously it was already hot but then you added butt growth and auto-lubrication. This actually might be my favorite thing on here. EDIT: Of course Nupiter helped you write this. He wrote my OTHER favorite story on here. Props to you both.

7/25/21, 12:00 AM
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! You're free to share any ideas you have, although I'll admit I already probably have more ideas than I can realistically work into one story! @SC Walker

SC Walker
7/25/21, 12:21 AM
@bluesuedewho Haha I feel the same way. I have tons of ideas but not enough time to write them all. Is it cool if I email you?

7/25/21, 12:31 AM
The forum PM system would be better, if it's all the same to you. @SC Walker
7/25/21, 12:24 AM
amazing!
7/25/21, 12:15 AM
what do these words translate to in English plz. what language? Frigore et immobile. Et tactus, in dilectione, in sentiunt quis erit ex vobis definias. Feminarum sexus is neminem magis. Tantum sexus in hominibus. Multa and penis est.