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7/24/21, 5:48 PM
hot story. hope there is more to come.
7/24/21, 4:47 PM
home sweet home,indeed I was legit scared Leo might wake up again fully. Good swerve. Loved the story. obliviousness mixed with suits are my favorite things. too bad it's over now. well,time to re-read
7/24/21, 3:35 PM
i'm sorry if it's meant to be a hot scene but i can't take the scenes seriously with the song lol
7/23/21, 6:27 PM
Firstly, seriously, love this story. So very cool. Sam going over the book and seeing older changes is brilliant. I was honestly thinking about that so it was cool that it was added. I think a fun little element could be the two going over it and together changing or fixing any of those elements that they see as not super fun. (Another option is they could add a line at the start of the book that things that were crossed out dissapear, in order to clean up the book, that could be interesting.) The self-lubricating sexy bubble butts is super hot. How it appeared is also super cool. I do kind of wish we got to see Kevin getting fucked into mindless bliss, but obviously with Sam as the pov character it didn't happen. Speaking of that, I am not super a fan of the whole us not knowing what Gabe wrote. Like I get why you did that but I liked seeing things get written at the time and so us not seeing that feels like an editing let down. Its the one thing so far that I was a little less than super happy about. That said this was a super hot chapter. This is an amazing story and I look forward to reading more of it. Also, I feel jealous towards Nutiper and MonsterMash62 for them helping contribute. hehe Seriously though, super sexy story. Really love the antics going on. I also like the slow and steady change of what it means to be straight and stuff. Oh, and the whole thing of him remembering how he did not have the bubble butt before while also remembering he did was a nice description.

7/24/21, 3:11 PM
Glad you're enjoying it so far! @Heru Kane
7/24/21, 12:34 PM
I hope there is more!
Apr 29, 2012
7/24/21, 11:36 AM
Loved the changes. Wished the boy could have been made older! Great job!
Protoborg
7/24/21, 10:17 AM
Except for the rather unfortunate view of humanity from Milo at the end, this was a really good story. I hope there is a second part at some point as I would love to know how things go with the "update". It was unfortunate that Milo didn't infect more people himself. The way this was presented was a really nice touch as well. It would have been nice to actually hear from the detective, though. All around a very good story with some very minor issues. Where are my sexy, sentient nanos?!
Dodger
7/24/21, 8:40 AM
Great story! You have an interesting style and i wanna see this band now 😁
7/24/21, 7:14 AM
This series just gets better and better. The Sam's obliviousness to the change was really hot and made the pay off when he realised what was up with his bubble butt even better. I also love the fact we don't get to see what Gabe wrote. Since the story's written from Sam's perspective the idea of him being taught a lesson but not knowing what's going to happen is super hot. I'm looking forward to finding out if he can figure out what's changed!