Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/24/21, 9:37 PM
Oddballs, you as always amazing in yours sex comedies. I hope Cowboy West and App Hazing series returns but this story needs join my list of series to wait. and wait. and wait...
7/24/21, 4:59 PM
I understand and I respect that, I wasn't trying to critisize your work. Far from it, I am attracted to your redneck/trailer trash angle in lot of stories. I am not American and I never saw Duck Dinasty, everything I know from Redneck is from stories like yours. I reckon they ain't just the setreotype, but they seem proud of who the are and I focus on posiitive side and ignore things like bigotry and rascism.

7/24/21, 9:01 PM
@Orc-Br Oh I didn't take it as criticism! Just thought I'd put in a little additional context is all, I appreciated the comment! The redneck/trailer trash/working class fetish stuff is complicated and you can't avoid the fact that it's wrapped up in politics as well, especially as polarized as things are now.
Anonymous
7/24/21, 8:57 PM
soooooo sexy. I have a few teachers id love to use that notebook on. Also excellent song choice.
7/24/21, 8:52 PM
Nick needs to turn the tables and get his revenge!
7/24/21, 5:48 PM
hot story. hope there is more to come.
7/24/21, 4:47 PM
home sweet home,indeed I was legit scared Leo might wake up again fully. Good swerve. Loved the story. obliviousness mixed with suits are my favorite things. too bad it's over now. well,time to re-read
7/24/21, 3:35 PM
i'm sorry if it's meant to be a hot scene but i can't take the scenes seriously with the song lol
7/23/21, 6:27 PM
Firstly, seriously, love this story. So very cool. Sam going over the book and seeing older changes is brilliant. I was honestly thinking about that so it was cool that it was added. I think a fun little element could be the two going over it and together changing or fixing any of those elements that they see as not super fun. (Another option is they could add a line at the start of the book that things that were crossed out dissapear, in order to clean up the book, that could be interesting.) The self-lubricating sexy bubble butts is super hot. How it appeared is also super cool. I do kind of wish we got to see Kevin getting fucked into mindless bliss, but obviously with Sam as the pov character it didn't happen. Speaking of that, I am not super a fan of the whole us not knowing what Gabe wrote. Like I get why you did that but I liked seeing things get written at the time and so us not seeing that feels like an editing let down. Its the one thing so far that I was a little less than super happy about. That said this was a super hot chapter. This is an amazing story and I look forward to reading more of it. Also, I feel jealous towards Nutiper and MonsterMash62 for them helping contribute. hehe Seriously though, super sexy story. Really love the antics going on. I also like the slow and steady change of what it means to be straight and stuff. Oh, and the whole thing of him remembering how he did not have the bubble butt before while also remembering he did was a nice description.

7/24/21, 3:11 PM
Glad you're enjoying it so far! @Heru Kane
7/24/21, 12:34 PM
I hope there is more!