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Apr 29, 2012
7/24/21, 11:36 AM
Loved the changes. Wished the boy could have been made older! Great job!
Protoborg
7/24/21, 10:17 AM
Except for the rather unfortunate view of humanity from Milo at the end, this was a really good story. I hope there is a second part at some point as I would love to know how things go with the "update". It was unfortunate that Milo didn't infect more people himself. The way this was presented was a really nice touch as well. It would have been nice to actually hear from the detective, though. All around a very good story with some very minor issues. Where are my sexy, sentient nanos?!
Dodger
7/24/21, 8:40 AM
Great story! You have an interesting style and i wanna see this band now 😁
7/24/21, 7:14 AM
This series just gets better and better. The Sam's obliviousness to the change was really hot and made the pay off when he realised what was up with his bubble butt even better. I also love the fact we don't get to see what Gabe wrote. Since the story's written from Sam's perspective the idea of him being taught a lesson but not knowing what's going to happen is super hot. I'm looking forward to finding out if he can figure out what's changed!
CandyDarky
7/24/21, 4:40 AM
This ending was amazing! I loved every chapter but this ending was just the best. I had a lot of fun following these stories. You are incredibly talented!
7/24/21, 3:59 AM
Story starts off a little confusing, first has the narrator meeting Sean 1-2 years ago, then says he had developed a crush over the course of many years, but once it gets going, it gets good.
7/24/21, 3:55 AM
Fantastic and hope to read more
7/22/21, 8:05 PM
Fun and sexy quick read! Just curious though, they started selling the hats out to their customers, so did those people somewhat fell under the gear's control then (perhaps at a lighter level)? Great to know that you'll have more coming! Looking forward to see what other groups/professions you have on mind for a uniform change! Others have already mentioned the uniformed civil services and sports teams, but maybe also an office, high-end restaurant/clubhouse (waiters), scout, male college dorm, frat, men's choir, church congregation, etc... Will you just continue to leave the plot as the uniforms being sent to the subjects as "mystery deliveries", or will you consider revealing the "ultimate mastermind" behind it?

7/23/21, 1:50 AM
@tomozco Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying. There's at least one in your suggestions that's in the works, but more ideas for uniforms are always welcome. For revealing the mastermind at the end, I will say definitely maybe. There's at least a few more organisations in need of an update first. As for the hats, well. Short answer, yes. Long answer, yes with more to come.

7/23/21, 2:48 PM
@TickledPink I'll look forward to the upcoming installments for more answers and surprises then! I'll throw in one more uniform suggestion (if not already in your plans): what about the delivery guys actually delivering the uniforms to those unsuspecting subjects...? ;)

7/24/21, 3:00 AM
Cheers @tomozco, there's definitely too many package delivery double entendres to avoid the deliverymen forever.
7/23/21, 7:21 AM
Wonderful, as always. Hoping to see a handyman or window-washer. Cable guy! I'm trying to think of every porno character. Ooh, a potter! Lifeguard! IT guys! I would say mailman but that might end up revealing too much about the mysterious man too quickly. I'm hooked.

7/24/21, 2:58 AM
Thanks @Norismo! There's definitely some uniform suggestions there I've never even considered. As for the mailmen, I mean, sexy mailman is a classic.
7/24/21, 12:21 AM
This story is truly exciting so far, very fresh takes, and a bit of a slow burn, but still extremely sexy. I hope that when Sam is truly remade into some kind of hypersexualized iteration of himself, that you spend a few chapters with some extended sex scenes and antics. The slow build up is very sexy, but the narrative focus with Sam keeps us from getting exciting scenes like Kevin getting pounded out by Gabe. Once that flips I'm hoping you can add more sexual content to compliment the excellent writing and concept.

7/24/21, 12:32 AM
Thanks! There are enough small changes that have built up to a critical mass at this point. Expect more action in future chapters! @brium